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Bali Sunset alias Kitch


Bali Sunset alias Kitch
Photo Information
Copyright: Nino di Bari (ndb1958) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 364 W: 0 N: 44] (2036)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-05
Categories: Experimental
Camera: Sony DSC-F717
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2005-09-30 10:13
Viewed: 752
Points: 2
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I saw the most beautiful sunsets ever in Bali

PP:
PAINTING
contrast
colour
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  • goc Gold Star Critiquer [C: 321 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-09-30 10:33]
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hi,
in my opinion with your postprocessing you ruined what probably was a very nice sunset photo

peace,
goran

I'm sorry Nino but I don't understand your postprocessing even for experimental reasons : what is the message here ?
I don't like the result and the sun is centered ...

Hi Nino,
Looks fine, to me. Maybe unlike the others, I've gotten use to this kind of pp work. I think this looks more abstract now, than a "real sunset" that the others are looking for. Matter of fact, I think the color bands where the sun is, look like a pair of arms holding the sun for display...weird, huh? But that's how I see it. Anyhow...nice work.
Take care.
Richard

Hello Nino! You "remixed" the original photo intitled "when the sun goes down"...The colors are nice and the pp work is good.Imho I think that what is disturbing the people is the lower part of the picture.There is nothing wrong to have the sun rigth in the center as long as there is nothing else distracting the view.The small reflection in the lower part of the picture is disturbing...I have done a ws for you cropping it differently and playing also with the color balance and the brightness.Hoping that you will still enjoy it! Michel

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