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Things Dont Happen The Way We Want


Things Dont Happen The Way We Want
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Copyright: willy rachmat (wr1611) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 25 W: 7 N: 19] (187)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-11-19
Categories: Friends/Family
Camera: Canon EOS 10D, Canon EF 28-105mm US
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/60 seconds
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2004-11-19 14:15
Viewed: 938
Points: 6
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its just a snap shot.. i just spoted my friends in this position and wait for them to pose the way i want... luckly they posed just as i wanted... hehehe

using PS, did some cropping, framing, level setting.... the picture was a bit grainy, so i used NI to get rid of the grainy spots....

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Very intense picture. I think that having only his face in focus, and having the red beside him adds to the intensity. The fact that she seems on a different level suggests that she is just not going to get through to him. Nothing seems likely to console. Hope he recovered. :-) Well done!

Very good composition. I like the way you placed the red door so close the man in the foreground. Perhaps clone out the white part above his head. If you don't mind me saying so.
Great cropping, and the black border only on the top and bottom is very creative. Well done, Willy.

What I like from this picture with the letter-box cropping is that it looks like it is from a film( of the moving picture kind) about some teenage melodrama.

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