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Do I Get A Strike ..


Do I Get A Strike ..
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Copyright: willy rachmat (wr1611) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 25 W: 7 N: 19] (187)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2004-04-06
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Canon EOS 10D, Canon EF 28-105mm US, SanDisk CF 512M
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/10 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Shoes from Around the World [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2004-05-03 8:03
Viewed: 938
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
this is picture of my friend. we were playing bowling at a 24hours amusement centre in Japan. she was frustated we her scores, at this time she was just looking at the pins wether they all falls down or not.... but well, it didnt..

i used PS for monochrome color, level adjusting to make it darker, put some noise in it, cropping and framed it.
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To gringofil: "the dude"wr1611 1 05-04 02:44
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Did you ever see the move The Big Lebowski? If not that you have to watch it...it's about bowling and it has some great camera angles as well. I think this shot is more suited for the cinema than for normal still photography and it works wonderfully to evoke a sense of being there. Nice choice of B&W as well. Nothing to nit pick, really. Well done.

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  • mimi (62)
  • [2004-05-04 0:30]

Great angle. YOu can tell from her stance that she's watching and waiting. I love how her legs frame the pins. I might crop just a bit of the foreground.

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