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Asahi River


Asahi River
Photo Information
Copyright: Akhmad Sabarudin (sabarjpn) (180)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-06-15
Categories: Nature
Camera: Nikon Coolpix 4300, Nikkor 8-24 mm, Lexar CF 64 MB
Exposure: f/4.5
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): My Photos [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2004-06-15 8:18
Viewed: 1294
Points: 14
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
One side of Asahi river in Okayama city, Japan.
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I like this tranquil scene with the mountains reflecting in the water. The red boat at the front adds a nice accent to the composition.

Beautiful. Nice composition and great colors. Well done.

Very peacefull scene. Nice reflection. The boat adds to the composition. Very well done.

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  • jrj Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 162 W: 14 N: 82] (724)
  • [2004-06-25 12:35]

Very nice Akhmad. Good colours, nice light, well done compo..

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  • Yod Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 103 W: 10 N: 72] (975)
  • [2004-08-05 16:18]

I would say everything about this picture is perfect.The boat exactly where it is supposed to be if we consider the rule of the third about composition,ecellent color and the right depth of field for a landscape.Above all the mood the picture conveys is one of complete quietude which adds an extra appeal to the photo.A very good photograph.Yod

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  • limba3 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1053 W: 434 N: 421] (13350)
  • [2006-02-25 19:04]

Hi
Very good composition of the photograph.
Anna

Akhmad,
This is a very good image. I like the use of natural lighting and the composition very much. The f/4 apreture may have been a bit shallow but it has kept the mountains in fairly good focus and you left some sort of note. What are the lines in the trees to the right for? Good job.
Scott

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