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autumn duck
Photo Information
Copyright: Akihisa Kitanosono (AKITA) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1032 W: 81 N: 66] (12430)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-10-29
Categories: Nature
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/15 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Friday's Theme 11.06.09: Autumn/Spring [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2009-11-07 0:41
Viewed: 136
Points: 30
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an autumn duck,
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Hi Akihisa,
What an original interpretation of Autumn in this presentation.
Beautiful fallen golden leaves immersed in the pond with a duck producing some ripples to agitate the clear water.
Beautiful sky reflection, thus creating an awesome capture.
Very well seen, my friend, and with your photographic ability you present to us such a natural beauty.
Have a good week end.
Regards,

Francis Xavier

Hi Akihisa
Wwell captured moment,wonderful autumn colours ,good focus and and exsposure.
TFS
Regards
Andrzej

Konnichiwa Akihisa-san!

Is this a surprise from you..? Indeed a autumn duck :)
A great capture of cute mallard with nice sharpness and from a great POV. The colors are perfect and water with autumn leaves gives nice charm to this work.

Very well done.

arigato,
Paras

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  • KBE Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 450 W: 103 N: 593] (2739)
  • [2009-11-07 1:56]
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Hello Akihisa
Beautiful yellows to show the Autumn season :)
Since ur shutter is 1/15 which is very very slow in the terms of handheld going to the focal length of 70mm (as u've not mentioned the use of tripod and a little had shake is quite visible)

Try a little angled composition placing the duck at right top ROTs heading to the lower left might give u an effective composition (IMHO)

TFS
Cheers
JZM

Bonjour Akihisa.
Une belle image animalière composée avec de belles couleurs chaudes d’automne.
L’oiseau et peut-être un peu trop centré mais cela n’enlève rien au charme de cette belle image.
Bonne journée.
Urs

Hello Akihisa,

A lovely autumnal shot with superb colours and the added interest of such a pleasing focal image. This duck, shovelling in the leaves, disturbing the water, is a delightful subject.
My suggestion for improvement would be to improve the composition by cropping, to place the duck in a strong place within the frame.

I have done a w/s to illustrate my thoughts. I hope you like it.

Kind regards,
Bev :-)

Sorry, run out of smilies, though this is worth it.

Hi,Akihisa!
Yours picture is verry nice and this duck is lovely.
Nice details,colours and beautifull composition.
Friendly regards.Alin.

Hello, Akihisa -
I had to open this thumbnail before I really got the effect of the image - beautifully balanced light with the smooth reflection and fantastic colors below the water's surface. Lovely peaceful mood, which is one of the hallmarks of your work. Fantastic!

Ciao Akihisa, great capture of lovely duck in nice pose, splendid composition with wonderful autumnal colors, very well done, have a good week end, ciao Silvio

Wow! Beautiful scene here and it is the first time I have seen one of your wildlife shots! Considering the slow shutter speed of 1/15 sec you have done well to get a very sharp shot. The action, colours, and clarity are superb and well presented shot! Well done Akihisa and TFS!

regards,

Dilshan

Akihisa
Wonderful capture your duck!
Great details and colors.
Horia

What an artistic shot all the colors complement the duck perfectly.Best regards Otto.

What an interesting scene The water with the leafy bottom looks so pretty Nice job
warm regards
David

hi Akihisa ... amazing shotwith beautiful happy atmosphere can give :)... thanks for sharing ..have a nice weekend .regards Harout.

hola, ya estoy de nuevo aqui, estuve unos dias ausente por un asunto familiar grave, y ya se soluciono todo, espero ponerme al dia, abrazos.

Bella imagen, un abrazo

Hello,
Excellent autumn colours and light capture. Great sharpness and excellent composition and texture. Great idea.
Best wishes,
Achim

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