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Ritsurin Park


Ritsurin Park
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Copyright: Akhmad Sabarudin (sabarjpn) (180)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-03-29
Categories: Nature
Camera: Nikon Coolpix 4300, Lexar CF 64 MB
Exposure: f/3.4
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Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): My Photos [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2006-04-16 8:28
Viewed: 1647
Points: 12
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  • edal Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 599 W: 71 N: 645] (4306)
  • [2006-04-16 9:11]

Hi, Akhmad!
I like very much your Japanese garden. I like its pov and colors.
Anton

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  • andrei Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 229 W: 123 N: 164] (1237)
  • [2006-04-16 10:03]

Akhmad
The colours arre very bright and draw me into the picture. I also like the composition - where does the path lead to? Some notes about pp work would have been helpfull.
Andrei

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  • Eru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 235 W: 4 N: 83] (2760)
  • [2006-04-16 10:33]

Hello Akhmad,

Another particular shoot.
I'm curious to know how you obtain your effect with colors...
Excellent anyway!

Marc.

Des couleurs douces et chatoyantes tout à fait digne d'un jardin japonais. Bien vu. Amitié, Patty.

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  • lucbus Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2115 W: 92 N: 1857] (10319)
  • [2006-04-17 6:21]

Hi Akhmad,
Very nice photo of this park, The colors are very nice and I like the position of this little bridge on the vertical third. Very well done.
Luc

Beautiful garden
The picture has a good compo, transmits a nice sensation of harmony and beauty but perhaps colours have been oversaturated, making it to look a little unreal, like in some old postcards. I suppose you did it so to accent the pink colours of the cherry tree, but it would be better not to inflate so much the colours, in my oppinion.
Bests regards and wishes.
Points tomorrow
Jacobo

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