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The morning sun


The morning sun
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Copyright: toru kona (kona) Gold Star Critiquer [C: 68 W: 0 N: 1] (1258)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2001-11-24
Categories: Nature
Camera: nikon f3p, Nikkor 600mm f:4.0 D, Fujichrome Provia
Exposure: f/4, 1/8000 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): WILD LIFE'S COMMANDING PRESENCE, My favorite birds, • Wong Favourites • [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2006-09-01 17:47
Viewed: 1862
Favorites: 3 [view]
Points: 54
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nice capture Toru, I like the semi sillhouette. And th fog gives the photoa great look.

Lex

Excellent color and mood Toru. Perhaps a bit more space on the right side for the birds to fly into. A pleasure to view either way.

Joe

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  • Tintin Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2198 W: 267 N: 345] (1982)
  • [2006-09-01 19:23]

Amazing capture, Toru. The movement is just perfectly captured and the birds seem to be doing a ballet dance over the water. The light is just perfect. Excellent!

This is great, Toru. The lighting here was just right and the details of the water are good. Good crop, if you did one.

Stupendous!

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  • KellEy Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 401 W: 48 N: 170] (2074)
  • [2006-09-01 21:19]

I really like the colouring, POV and lighting in this photo.
Well done

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3297 W: 786 N: 4419] (19874)
  • [2006-09-01 21:34]

This is has true poetry for the eyes! I like very much this superb monochrom in the fresh morning and the gracious movement of these birds. You are an artist,Toru! Bravo! Annie

Bonjour Toru,
very well worked, very good set-up to get ready for the right moment. The lighting is like you would placed it. Your photo is 69 kb and you can go until 200kb. The definition would have been improved. Conggratulations!

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  • ub06 Silver Star Critiquer [C: 38 W: 0 N: 6] (196)
  • [2006-09-02 0:34]

its a class photograph u should apply to b a national gygrophic chanel photographer
keep it up

Hello Toru

excellent picture with warm colours and very well composed+

congratulations

jjo

Excellent Toru! Beautiful soft colour and light and fine focus. TFS
David

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  • Alba Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 537 W: 0 N: 206] (2760)
  • [2006-09-02 6:00]

Hi Toru,
How did you manage to create such poetry? It's beautiful, as so many oriental sketches, thanks for that pure beauty.
Mary

This is really nice Toru. I like the sepia tones here and the nice range of values. The light on the wing edges and water drops is expecially nice.

TFS

Evelynn : )

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  • kateb Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 514 W: 153 N: 338] (2991)
  • [2006-09-03 18:30]

An excellent capture, and it works really well with the muted browns, and the water drops add interest to the composition. Great photo!

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  • shal Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 165 W: 46 N: 161] (1304)
  • [2006-09-03 23:54]

WOW I love this brilliant capture,
what a great POV, and the setting could not be any better :)
Great mood to see this pair making a splash as they lift off the surface of water, the mist adds well to the image :)
Very Well Done,
chk out my wildlife posts at treknature : shal

Cheers,
Vishal Sabharwal

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  • wck Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 757 W: 37 N: 423] (3843)
  • [2006-09-06 1:49]

Hi Kona,This is Absolutely Amazing!!! Taking Wildlife are challenging, From this chrisp detail, shutter speed, f-stop, have shown your experients to achieve the best in many aspect. pleasent image!!!

Wong

Simply gorgeous. Stunning! Congratulations.
John

Konnichi wa Toru san !

This is indeed my favorite among all the photos you posted so far! and you posted great works in your gallery. So I do love this one very much. I added it at once in my theme: favorite birds.
The movements , the mood , the silhouettes , the color; everything is just perfect!
10/10 !
Robert

Wow! Wow! Excellen shot! Very smooth colours, sharp object and incredible composition. I can't stop staring at it. Well done Toru!

UUhhh... Ain't that nice? What a great shot. The movement of the swand and the splash of the water are very dramatic. The lighting is superb and fog or mist is incredibly marvelious.

AMAZING!!!

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  • smena Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 171 W: 94 N: 14] (483)
  • [2006-11-30 7:17]

You've done a great job here. Congrats !

Fidel

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  • SkyF Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1666 W: 136 N: 1263] (6138)
  • [2006-12-10 8:12]

Hello Kona,
I was admiring your beautiful swan pictures, they are georgeous. This one is my favorite, mainly because of the fabulous light and the mist that add such an excellent ambiance. Beautifully composed action photo
TFS..Sky

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  • miau Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 499 W: 0 N: 59] (3602)
  • [2006-12-11 21:49]

Bonjour Toru.
Une exceptionnelle luminosité et une image très poétique!
C'est très beau.
Michel.

Toru, your photos were on opstart page, and got a chance to enter your gallery. Loved this picture of flying swans. Wonderful moment captured. Sepia tones look great here. :) Vandana

Gooood and smoooth :) shot. Toru!

Regards
ilhan

Hi Toru,
What a great captured moment!! The lighting, tone, and shutter speed are so fantastic. Great work!!
TFS,
Phavin

Nice rim lights on plumes !

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