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Lips
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Copyright: roberta Jardim (roberta) (61)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-11
Categories: Artwork
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2004-12-15 0:59
Viewed: 1180
Points: 20
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  • zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 946 W: 120 N: 59] (262)
  • [2004-12-15 4:11]

sweet lips sweet idea ;-) I love your centerfold pic. The softness is very right for the pose and makes it very delicate. I bet your model (you maybe?) has a beautifull smile...woudl love to see that too. I think teh two small pictures in the midle, they are the same aren't they? I would change one of them and make them a litle less red arounf the lips them selfes. The red colour on the lips however breakes nicely with th esoftness of the other picures. I like this more and more all them time. I really liek the one in the lover right corner too...a begining to a smile there and the light is refelcted beautifully.

Welcome to TL Roberta, looking forward to see what more you will show us.

roberta, i agree with zandra about the red around the lips. i also agree with her in that i really like the photo. it is very soft and sweet...an eye pleasing photo.
welcome to TL!

very nice idea. the colors.. the lips..the details..this is good artwork! my comment is come of those blurred/softed lips are really too blurred or soft...

Hola Roberta.

Perfecta composición, muy atípica. Me gusta la suavidad de las fotos.

PAMELA

Nice selection of lips! Blur is very appropriate here. I like the effect. The composition have nice equilibrium.

Different and pleasing image.

Nicely done.

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  • Quark Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 1339 W: 10 N: 29] (66)
  • [2004-12-15 15:19]

Mmmmmm, so soft and smooth, very, very nice collage you've made here, Roberta, just great ! And it's your first shot ! Welcome !!

Você está em tudo que é lugal não?
Ótima colagem.. harmônica e equibilibrada.
Benvinda!
Abraço!!!
Carmem

Very Good! Adorei suas composições. Muito criativas e bonitas.
Vc está no BRFoto? acho que te conheço!!!
..Abraços e seja bem vinda ao TL!
David Bat.

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  • Lisar Gold Star Critiquer [C: 319 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-07-08 14:29]

sweet dreams are made of this. I love each pic and i love every sense comming from the sight of such gorgeous, kissable lips. And that flirtatious hand under the chin ... Nice manipulation.

Compliments!

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