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Learning about word...
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Copyright: Sabina Yamamoto (devylla) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 379 W: 19 N: 427] (2424)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-04-24
Categories: Daily Life, Decisive Moment, Friends/Family, Portrait
Camera: Canon EOS 40D, Cannon EFS 17-85mm
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/80 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Adorable Kids 2 [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-05-13 21:21
Viewed: 431
Points: 41
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hi there,

My name is Erika,I'm 8 month old...and my mom said you want to meet me.
So this is me...I like to play a lot...plaing with mom is my favorite time.
I like to climb,to walk,to see,to touch...to pull objects in the house.
I also like to eat,I love milk!
I like my mom,enery morning I help her to wake up...I give her many kisses and hit her on the face with my toys...she is very happy to see me when she's awake.
Ilove her hair...everytime when she hold me...Is so long and beautiful...perfect for me to play with it...an pull over and over till my mom put's me down...and smile at me...I think she like it.
So this is me...not much to say...but I'm a pretty little girl,don't you think?
Moomy said to me everyday...:)

Fortuna, dareco, wieyos, Redrubin, lilimih33, tanburi, black_dream, Dot, mceklips, jusninasirun has marked this note useful
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Yes....she is a pretty little princess indeed.

hey, she's pretty clean....see no saliva! .....:)

nice pose and soft colour. well done.

Arigato goizamasu!
Agoes

merhaba dear sabina
wonderful portrait picture.wonderful lovely baby.well done.
best regards.
gürkan akçakır.

Hello Sabina!
In sfirsit o poza cu dragutza ta fetita!
Yes, she is very very prety!
Very nice perspective!
Numai bine!
Lili

oooooooooooo what a sweetie!!! I just want to cuddle her. Is this your baby? Added to my adorable kids theme, she has such a cute expression, and she looks VERY smart!!! TFS

It s very nice baby and portrait
lot of luck to her and a beautiful life
ciao
Have nice day
Lucio

Wonderfull portrait Sabina,
oohhh...she is soo cute and beautifull,
great expression of her face, bravooo!!!
TFS

Regards!

Hello Sabina,
So cute,
What a lucky baby!...
What a lucky mother!...
I liked feelings of Erika.
TFS
Selahattin E

はい Sabina,

かわいいー ですね!!あなたの Erika ちゃん。いい さしん です!
おつかれさま!!

TFS,
Hong

Hi Sabina,
Very sweety portrait.Lovely compo.I like this cute baby.TFS.
Cheers,

hAyAti

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  • Dot Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 780 W: 0 N: 1191] (4966)
  • [2008-05-14 16:27]

HI Sabina
You are blessed as she is a very lovely little girl who sounds absolutely wonderful, and I do bleive you captured her personality to a T
Great shot
Dot

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  • skot Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 38 W: 3 N: 33] (162)
  • [2008-05-15 0:02]

Hey Sabina,

You have a good shot of the baby here. I know how difficult this can be, I have two (almost 4yrs old and 3 months old).

Erika's character really shines through here. She has a bright expression and, though not looking at the camera, she is obviously fixed on something or someone else. I love her almost-smile, too.

There are just a couple tweaks I would suggest. Your DOF is good. The background is well blurred. I do see a little softness in her eyes, though. Almost like your focal point was just at the tip of her nose. I also think that the table/chair leg in the background is somewhat distracting. I know that a complete change of setting is not possible, but it is something to keep in mind when you next frame her portrait.

Your colors are good. I like the lighting a lot. It looks like windowlight and really accentuates her face.

Keep up the good work.

skot

Hi Devylla,
what a cute baby .Erika is little princes.Congratulations my friend.TFS.Necla.:)later.

Hello Sabina,

Erika is a beautiful and lovely little child and this portrait is excellent! Very well done!
Congratulations twice: for the job and the baby!
TFS

Sergio
on thursday

Hi Sabina,

Great to meet her, she is BEAUTIFUL and she sure will be good in waking you up. Hope you still have enough energy left to really enjoy her, because they grow up soooo fast.
I really would not mind seeing her more often over time....

TFS
Els

In sfarsit!!! Doamne, frumoasa-i galushca!!! Sa-ti traiasca, sa fie cuminte si desteapta, ca frumoasa e! Are cu cine semana!Sa stii ca la fel ma trezeste si James! :))) In privinta parului... nu mai are de ce trage acum ca m-am tuns, dar inainte, nu adormea daca nu avea manutza in parul meu. Acum imi pune labutza, duios pe cap...in lipsa parului. :)))
Tare ma bucur ca in cele din urma te-ai hotarat sa ne-o arati.
Pupici pe obrajorii aia dulci!
Diana
**

Awwww! she's sooo cuutttee!! :)
I love her natural baby expression! and she dresses well too!
(thanks to her mom! lol!)
now this is what a romanian/japanese looks like huh?! ;)

Congratulations!

Ollie DLC

E foarta draguta printesica ta, Sabina! Imi place mult expresia pe care i-ai prins-o, foarte frumos portret de bebe, excelenta nota.
Felicitari si toate cele bune voua,
Sorina

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3301 W: 663 N: 1895] (15853)
  • [2008-05-20 4:28]

Sa va traiasca si sa fiti fericiti !

v

Hello sabina. Your Erika looks fine and healthy. Nice shot with big beautiful eyes. Good depth and skin tone of the image. Well done and thanks for sharing. Jusni

Buna Sabina,
deci aceasta e comoara ta :)
Are chipul unui ingeras.
Superba fotografie.
Toate felicitarile mele pentru ingeras si mamica lui :)
Numai bine intregii familii.
Ioana
:) revin

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  • ines8 Gold Star Critiquer [C: 105 W: 0 N: 0] (659)
  • [2008-05-29 9:02]

Buna, Sabina,
Ai o fetita splendida, asa cum este in roz e ca un boboc de trandafir...Splendid portret.
Cele mai bune ginduri si urari de bine,
ines

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  • datis Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 95 W: 4 N: 22] (489)
  • [2008-07-20 10:49]

Hi Sabina,

So cutey kid, They are small angels which make our life.

Regards,
Daryoosh

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