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Geisha


Geisha
Photo Information
Copyright: Claudio Comberti (Cla80) (6)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-07
Camera: Panasonic Lumix DMC-FZ 5
Exposure: f/3.3, 1/100 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-10-13 23:23
Viewed: 126
Points: 2
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"Claudio's Adventures in Wonderland"
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To jobaluyot: thank you!Cla80 1 10-14 11:57
To ScottHale: thank you!Cla80 3 10-14 11:54
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interesting take.


i suggest some more sharpness around her face though, it looks like the shot was taken quite hurriedly. try to take your time before releasing the shutter so the camera or you can focus more properly.

Claudio,
1st of all, Welcome to TrekLens.
I'm not too sure of the exposure here. I think there's a great amount of overexposure on the top of her head. Posting the photo that includes the exif data is always helpful to have members help identify setting problems. I also think notes are important. I like the composition here.
I'd like to encourage you to keep posting but add the EXIF Data with your photos.
Scott

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  • MLINES Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1303 W: 96 N: 1022] (8472)
  • [2009-11-06 22:12]

Hi Claudio, Good portrait which is well cropped. The close-up portrait shows a lot of details of these iconic women of Japan.TFS. Murray.

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