Monna Lisa Smile!

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• xodroolis (497)
• [2008-03-26 1:18]

Monna Lisa smile for sure.
But much more beautiful than lisa.
TFS

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• ola_kwiatek (7323)
• [2008-03-26 1:29]

Dear Redrubin!
Amazing girl. Wonderful face. Beautiful eyes. Very nice capture. Good portrait.
Cheers!

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• rewshearer (15541)
• [2008-03-26 1:41]

Nice portrait - the catchlights in her eyes are different, but very appealing! I'm not sure why you replaced the background, there's no mention of it in your note, but the PP work is quite messy.

Rew

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• pozaru (16099)
• [2008-03-26 2:27]
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Hi Lucio !


Unfortunately I'm afraid that Rew is right about the PP work on that wonderful red BG.

v

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• Adri (5514)
• [2008-03-26 2:31]

Hello Lucio,
I think she is beautiful! This portrait is beautiful too. I love the pose, the eyes and the smile of this model.
Greetings from Holland,
Adri

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• temmeli (202)
• [2008-03-26 2:52]
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Ciao Lucio,
A beautiful portrait have you posted here!
Excellent exposed with good clarity and of course beautiful model.
Wish you a lovely day dear friend!
Linda

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• black_dream (3537)
• [2008-03-26 4:30]

Interesting girl...I'm not too happy about the background, but apart from that, well done!
Auguri!
Diana

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• mvdisco (17801)
• [2008-03-26 5:19]

Hi Lucio,
Beautiful portrait of this beauty, nice composition and great naturel colors, very nice looking girl and more lovely than Mona Lisa,Beautiful hair and eyes very well done.
Michel

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• appalcarp (4095)
• [2008-03-26 15:36]
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Nice shot overall, but the bg here is distracting. The model's expression is great. The color might need just a bit of green or yellow as she's very 'pinky.' TFS

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• Silvio2006 (26365)
• [2008-03-27 7:11]

Ciao Lucio, questa è meglio della bandiera turca, al background proprio uno non ci guarda, non mi aspettavo che nel Kazakhstan ci fossero tali bellezze della natura, magnifico il riflesso di luce negli occhi, abbagliante, bravo e grazie per la vbella panoramica, ciao Silvio

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• jazmin (6729)
• [2008-03-27 14:24]
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Hi, Lucio!

Attractive model, with mysterious smile.:-)

Ildiko

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• socroviche (532)
• [2008-03-29 2:41]

Just little jealous but beautiful girl

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• gnc (1550)
• [2008-03-29 9:49]
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Hey Lucio,

Yes, perfect smile, very intriguing and mysterious. And a very beautiful model.
ciao,
Cristiano

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• lisapw1 (5366)
• [2008-03-30 8:33]
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Hi Lucio,

You have a beautiful woman in this photo. Like a few others, I found the background distracting from the model. I tried to work with the background in workshop, but it was more difficult that I imagined...especially since I'm relatively new to them. I decided to crop the photo and smudge the little background remaining.

thanks for sharing, Lisa

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• CAROL50 (2079)
• [2008-03-30 12:33]
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Hello Lucio,
One of the cutest girl i have ever seen on this site .Her pose is great, reminiscent of the famous Mona Lisa we all know about, i like the comparision but that is about as far as it will go here.I am afraid Rew ,Vlad ,Gary and Lisa are right about the BG.I am not much into portrait but something is wrong with her BG and leftover bits of blemishes around her figure.I have tried making a workshop along the lines of Lisa' s but made a B&W instead and chose not to resize in a bigger format because way too much noise is left so i rather added a large frame to compensate and make the new framed model appear larger on screen, Thanks,
hope you like it,
Carol

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• MYLZ (114)
• [2008-05-25 3:30]

i like her smile but her eye give me more seductive...nice......superb...but the crop of background is not good...

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• Longroute (228)
• [2008-06-10 6:19]
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Il ritratto è più che bello, e non solo per i pregi della modella, ma anche per la bravura nel ritrarla. Mi chedo come mai sei dovuto andare in Kazhakstan per trovarla, sembra una diva di Hollywood.
Ciao,
Donato

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• carifuna07 (604)
• [2008-06-26 2:49]
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Eh!! Una bellíssima donna!!! italiana?
mi piace molto il fondo della foto... i colori e suprattutto la luce1!!
bravo!

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• MLINES (6587)
• [2008-08-27 22:44]
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Hi Lucio, Very fine portrait of this lovely lady. Your background replacement is very neat and tidy. What software did you use as this is helpful at times. TFS. Murray.