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A novice smile


A novice smile
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Copyright: Hans Spruijt (GreenBaron) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3028 W: 759 N: 9260] (36981)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-11-01
Categories: Daily Life, Mood, Portrait
Camera: Nikon D70s, Sigma 70-300mm APO DG Macro, Hitachi4GBMicrodrive, 58mm UV
Exposure: f/8, 1/750 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Travelogue: My Trip Through south east Asia
Theme(s): Round trip through Indochina, Green Baron's most recent pictures on TL, My Favorite Smiles of Children of the World, Kids from the World Part X [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-12-06 2:03
Viewed: 648
Points: 98
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
A novice smile

Captured these two novice monks in the streets of Luang Prabang. When they saw me with my camera and tele-lens they gave me a priceless big smile.

A more colorful impression after yesterdays B&W one.

Below you find the thirteen rules to be kept by the monks, maybe an idea for us during the oncoming holidays? :-)

PP-work:
Increased brightness and contrast slightly. slight crop. Resized and sharpened, add frame and text.

Camera settings; (used 300mm tele zoom without tripod)

ISO: 200ASA
White balance: auto
Meetering: pattern
Shutter speed: 1/750
Aperture: f/8
Exposure compensation: 0
Focal length: 300 mm

sanghadisesas

The thirteen sanghadisesas are rules requiring an initial and subsequent meeting of the sangha (communal meetings). If the monk breaks any rule here he has to undergo a period of probation or displine after which, if he shows himself to be repentant, he may reinstated by a sangha of not less than twenty monks. Like the parajikas, the sanghadisesas can only come about through the monk's own intention and cannot be accidentally invoked. The thirteen sanghadisesas for bhikku are:
1. Discharge of semen, except while dreaming, or getting someone to discharge your semen.
2. Lustful bodily contact with a woman, including kissing or holding hands.
3. Making lustful remarks to a woman alluding to her genitals or sexual intercourse.
4. Requesting sexual favors from a woman, or telling her that she would benefit (i.e., spiritually) from having sex with the monk.
5. Arranging for a date, affair, or marriage between a man and woman.
6. Building a hut without permission from the sangha, or building a hut that exceed 3 x 1.75 meters in size.
7. Having someone else build a hut for you without permission from the sangha, or exceeding 3 x 1.75 meters in size.
8. Making unfounded charges about another bhikku in the hopes of having him disrobed.
9. Making deceitfully worded charges about another bhikku in the hopes of having him disrobed.
10. Agitating for a schism, even after having been rebuked three times.
11. Supporting an agitator, even after he was rebuked three times. (This only applies if there are fewer than four supporters.)
12. Rejecting well-grounded criticism, even after having been rebuked three times.
13. Criticizing the justice of one's own banishment, even after having been rebuked three times. (Source:wikipedia.com)

Happy holidays!

Adri, Helkoryo, Ejtaan, Hendrika, dareco, Maite, cunejo200, milas, ls_photography, shelbeesmom, Dpbours, filiz, kokos101, joopschotsman, janneman, perryhooter, mvdisco, SunToucher, harpya, Photograph2u, MLINES, eMBeer, OWO has marked this note useful
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  • Fons Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1499 W: 1 N: 108] (11220)
  • [2007-12-06 2:07]

mooie lach..maar niet te geloven
dat ze zo vroeg beginnen!

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  • Adri Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 255 W: 18 N: 775] (4830)
  • [2007-12-06 2:16]
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Hij is weer mooi Hans! De situering van deze kleurrijke jonge monniken komt mooi overeen met de structuur van de muur erachter, waardoor een prachtige compo ontstaat!
Groetjes uit Schouwen,
Adri

Good morning Hansie

This capture is really lovely, the colours lend themselves well and thier smiles are just as bright as thier robes.

Nice white frame sets off the image perfectly, superb shot and interesting notes.

TFS kind regards Smurfie

Nou... regels of niet als ik een hut wil bouwen die groter is dan 3 x 1.75 dan doet ik dat hoor! HA!

haahhahahah
In a strange way these rules seem very... silly.

Love the colorful image and the smiles are priceless indeed! Great capture Hans.

Cheers,
Anneke

Excellent pair of smiles !
Superb orange/grey contrast.


thanks,
v

I love this vibrant color and the beautiful smiles! A fantastic image. Also a very interesting and informative note. TFS

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  • JoeyL Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 68 W: 32 N: 69] (519)
  • [2007-12-06 4:28]

Hello Hans,
a perfect shot of these two young monks.
Pin sharp, very good clarity and crisp edges.
The B+W BG works really well.
Well done,
Joe

Good portrait . The subjet are spéccial and original. Inever see this style person in Quebec.. Réal.

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  • Maite Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 237 W: 3 N: 200] (1295)
  • [2007-12-06 4:53]

WOW! What an excellent and beautiful picture! Excellent focus, marvellous colors and perfect composition and presentation.
Superb job!
Greetings
Maite

Very engaging smiles and could lighten up my day. Their orange saffron robes of these young novice monks are certainly striking. Well framed. Danilo

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  • AJ786 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 778 W: 59 N: 1046] (6667)
  • [2007-12-06 5:40]

Hi my friend,

Beautiful shot. Lovely composition and superb framing...

TFS

Cheers
AJ786
:-)

beter dan de vorige in zwar wit
de kleur tegen de zwart wit achtergrond werkt goed hier

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  • Silke Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3213 W: 265 N: 6004] (22402)
  • [2007-12-06 7:11]
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superb!
The colours are outstanding and the PoV is perfect
TFS
silke

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  • milas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2059 W: 375 N: 2222] (22342)
  • [2007-12-06 7:20]

Merhaba myfriend Dear HANS...
verynice portrait and shot..superb colors and detail..bravo...SELAMLAR

This is beautiful Hans!! Great expressions captured, nice details, and a great note.
TFS

Ahh, there is the color! SUPERB Hans! Love their smiles, and they are truly dedicated to living the spiritual life, which is SO much better than living a "religious" life. Spirituality is about the Spirit....religion is about laws and rules. Something I cannot live up to! Great shot!
Linda
B-)

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  • ttreen Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1562 W: 116 N: 3521] (14072)
  • [2007-12-06 8:00]

Hello Hans
I really like that you have captured the smile here! The amazing orange robes stand out so well ... Very interesting notes..

Tricia

Hi Hans,

Yeah, nice! I prefer this colourful one over the B/W! Hahaha, great note. Especially like the "(This only applies if there are fewer than four supporters.)". No idea how to make sense out of that one :-).
Thanks for sharing!

Greetings, Dennis

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  • Hitbit Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 551 W: 174 N: 476] (5529)
  • [2007-12-06 10:03]

Mooie koppies Hans prima van kleur licht en scherpte, ze kunnen zo mee naar het EK;-0

Grtz Pim

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  • filiz Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 230 W: 0 N: 81] (1127)
  • [2007-12-06 10:05]

Hi Hans,
Nice portraits. I liked their mood and colours.

TFS........Filiz

Hi Hans,
In the 13 rules there is nothing stated about the brand of your camera.... So a 14th rule has to be added, I think.
A splendid photo of the young boys !!
greetings,
Joop!

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  • sela Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 331 W: 1 N: 186] (2045)
  • [2007-12-06 11:33]

Wonderful portrait of the 2 smiling novice minks.Very well composed.
Regards Rose

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 840 W: 0 N: 604] (7515)
  • [2007-12-06 12:02]

Loas bij uitstek in een zeer smaakvolle omlijsting Hans.

jan

Prachtig van compositie, scherptediepte ( het gebrek aan ), belichting, ...

Doordat je de achtergrond héél goed naar de achtergrond hebt verwezen, staan de kereltjes als het ware voor een grijze achtergrond met mooie vertikale doortekening.
Nu, 3 dingen die ik zou " verbeteren "
- recht boven het hoofd van de rechtse kerel
is er een " spatje " grijs.
( ik geloof niet in " de vurige tongen " en die gasten zeker niet ... )
- Heel je BG is infeite B/W behalve dat net stukje groen. Dat zou ik dan ook grijs maken.
- uiterst links, tegen de kant heb je daar een mooi doortekende grijs-partij met daarin een donkere vlek. Die had haar laatste licht bij mij gevangen. ;-)

Bedankt voor de stralende kopjes Hans :
dat tovert ook een glimlach op mijn gezicht.
:-)

Groetjes
Jan

Hello Hans !

Colorful post and smiles. One thing is sure , I was not a good canditate as a novice or monk (^_^).

Sweet post my friend. Keep thos shots and useful notes coming.

Speaking of a dream , I imagine my jolly good TL friends ( you and Richard ) dressed like that at Angkor Wat (*_^). Just kidding , without any offense to anybody.
Cheers!
Robert

Wonderful my friend!Greetings.
A.

Hi Hans
Nice portrait with the blurred background. Nice and clear. Super. TFS
Flemming

smiles and colors and Tibet
ahh
nice
inga

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  • k-2 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 611 W: 6 N: 409] (2633)
  • [2007-12-06 19:23]

Great smiles and colours captured. TFS. K2

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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3115 W: 211 N: 6561] (25952)
  • [2007-12-06 20:10]
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Cute little guys, but one looks like he's been in a fight with his swollen eyes :( And at that age they know they WANT to be a monk!!
It's a good portrait Hans - Janice

I like their facial expressions. Very sharp image, and the colors are wonderful. Framing is creative. However, I find that the shadows on their faces are the problem. Not that much but it may be a little bit of distraction. You may want to brighten their faces up a little bit more.

Sothy

Hy Hans,
Lovely portrait of the two young novice monks, beautiful colors and sharp picture, Excellent catch very well done..Nice note..
Michel

Hi Hans,
Lovely portrait of the two youngsters, great lighting and great timing on your behalf, you captured their smiles well.
I wonder if they really know or appreciate what is ahead of them.
My kind regards,
Pete.
PS; I look forward to having a Steinlager (or a milk) with you when you're down under.

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  • ayse51 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 976 W: 48 N: 626] (10437)
  • [2007-12-07 1:15]

Hi Hans beautiful duble portrait.Orange and their smile are very effective.TFS.Necla.:)later.

Hoi Hans,
Wat een super foto. Je DOF is echt perfect. Zelfs de randen van de twee jongens zijn perfect scherp. De helderheid van deze foto is echt top en de oranje kleur springt erg mooi naar voren. Een erg strakke foto.
Groeten,
Niek

Heerlijk Hans die gulle lach van deze 2 jonge monniken - Is het niet zo dat ze maar een bepaalde periode van hun leven toetreden - zoiets als dienstplicht maar dan heeeeel anders?
Hoe dan ook - mooie portret foto!
TFS
Els
:)volgen

hello hans!
wonderful portrait with great DOF, sharpness and colors, i like it.
tfs
zoran

pt

Great picture - superb colours, sharp focus and excellent DOF.
Thanks for sharing
Mark

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  • harpya Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4998 W: 178 N: 5838] (31259)
  • [2007-12-07 16:26]

Hello Hans

Beautiful visual!
This captures is really lovely,
The novices' smile is pure and angelical.
The color of their garments gave a beautiful touch in this white frame.
His good taste continues select my friend...
Greetings!!

Sérgio

Hi Hans, this is a very good portrait of the 2 monks, and their dress makes the image so colourful! And they have such a nice and genuine smile.

I like the diagonal from one head to the other.
Nice blured bg.

Take care, Yan :)

ps: and many thx for the kind words in : "Christmas Lights". I am very pleased that you like it.

Schitterend en prachtig zowel de compositie als het portret.
gr Frans

Nice photo.
Good portrait, colours, and DOF.

Tom

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  • Loon Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 120 W: 11 N: 91] (1159)
  • [2007-12-08 10:55]
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Excellent balance here my dear!
Indeed, the big smiles are priceless.
They have the privilege to be a monk and it shows.
Very well done.
TFS
Loon

Hi Hansie :o)

Very nice bright smiles ! So delicate and tender shot. Colours and light are exceptionnal, I love it ! Excellent background, bravo !
Bisous
Marylou

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1365 W: 122 N: 1939] (16221)
  • [2007-12-10 10:07]

Hello Hans, great shot of these two young boys, the composition is just fine and I love the smiles on their faces.Great background that makes the oranges to stand out. thanks !

Mario

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  • deains Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 205 W: 33 N: 1098] (4470)
  • [2007-12-10 11:35]

Very good of the smiling monks & their bright orange robes. reminds me of two that I met in Bangkok & will add a discussion. :} Don

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  • MLINES Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1130 W: 90 N: 889] (6212)
  • [2007-12-10 19:09]

Hi Hans, Your note adds an insight not known previously when seeing these monks in various countries. The vivid colours and good clarity along with the slightly mischivous expressions you have captured well. TFS. Murray.

PS are you considering becoming a monk? I just went off the idea.

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  • eMBeer Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 254 W: 61 N: 182] (1244)
  • [2007-12-13 17:13]

Hi Hans,

excellent portrait with very well working lateral light. Perhaps a bit too dark faces, byt this might be due to my monitor (sometimes I see the photo too dark I guess...). Fantastic contrast with bright, blurred and desaturated bg. tfs

Marek

Brilliant. Framing and presentation is top class !
Well done. Best regards, Daniel

Hi Hans,
oooohhh, I love this shot - these young monks are wonderful, the colours, their smiles, just perfect. I'm also back again from my holidays - o man, time is running so fast!
So I wish you wonderful Christmas-days, warm greetings
Sabine - wishnugaruda

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  • OWO Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 206 W: 71 N: 332] (2329)
  • [2008-03-03 4:50]

Hoi Hans,

Kwam deze tegen en ik moet eerlijk bekennen...hij is geweldig! Kleuren, compositie, onscherpe en monotoon gekleurde achtergrond n natuurlijk de fantastische uitdrukking op de gezichten van deze jonge leerlingen...allemaal af. Prachtplaat!

Groeten,

Edwin

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