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Copyright: Cheng UL (ahdi86) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 19 W: 2 N: 15] (178)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2009-02-22
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon EOS 350D
Exposure: f/8, 1/125 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-03-04 17:12
Viewed: 258
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This shot took with strobist,
and testing my new lens 17-40 f4L.

A boring sunday and decided to grab my girl friend to have a shoot.
There's some shots come out in my mind before this, i wan to try out something goods but failed.

But anyway i would like to share my most acceptable shot and listen what's missing in my shot.

Critiques and Comments are very welcome.
Thanks~
Have a nice day~
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sweet and soft, Cheng..
luv the composition and soft BW tone..
rgds,
Arfa

I like the idea! The way the sheet sits across her head is nice, the composition is good and the lighting you have set up works well. I wonder if it would look better without her eye visible?

What technique did you use for skin-smoothing? I think it would look better with more texture and detail on her neck, the smoothing is too much in my opinion.

Rew

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  • AndroK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 1470 W: 23 N: 0] (11726)
  • [2009-03-04 23:39]
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Hi Cheng...
Beautiful b@w portrait...
Nice tones, nice idea...
Regards...
Andro

Beautiful Portrait...
Nice tones, nice idea very creatave.

Hi Cheng,

Beautiful soft mood and great expression! Maybe the composition would be better if the girl was on the left. (Since she's looking to the right) But other than that very good shot!

TFS Greetings Simone

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