An Architect Touch

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• avallaunius (2061)
• [2008-11-18 4:31]
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i have a thing for nice povs of architectural subjects and this is a very fine pov, although i tried a different version in the WS

TFS

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• iso (27913)
• [2008-11-18 4:50]
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An architech touch and a special photographer, congrats Geoffrey. Well done, I adore it.

Iso.

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• wenqing (11857)
• [2008-11-18 6:42]
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very nice street composition here geoffrey
well seen and composed image

koh

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• Derona (4866)
• [2008-11-18 9:25]
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Hi Geoffery

Very nice architectural shot.
Like your composition, I would probably have cropped a little off the top so that the stone was all the way to the top and cloned out the light.
Also like the contrast between the stone and the metal.
Well noticed and captured.

Regards Derek

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• jonathanhart (15793)
• [2008-11-18 9:40]
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indeed the wall on the right could be cropped out, because even if its texture is highly interesting, it's not really well matched with the rest of the photo
still a very interesting simplicity
regards
jc

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• Damir_73 (790)
• [2008-11-18 16:31]
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Great point of view. Good composition and beautiful colors.

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• Ramdan (5756)
• [2008-11-18 19:11]
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Salam Rigz,
Aha... ini sedikit kisahnya sama dengan portrait Raziq saya. Kalau dalam portrait saya tu, saya sepatutnya crop kakak si Raziq, yang bro punya ni, kelihatannya tiang bata tu boleh dicrop juga - bagaimanapun, mungkin selera Rigz memerlukan tiang itu dibiarkan di situ?

Yang selainnya, gambar ni memang cukup kuat dari segi bentuk binaannya, warna dan pencahayaan. Sedikit peningkatan pada sharpness dn detail mungkin boleh diperolehi dengan penggunaan aperture yang tertutup sedikit seperti f8 dengan menaikkan lagi ISO sehingga 400 supaya shutter speednya mantain pada 1/45 yang bro guna di sini.

Apapun bro, merah menyala dengan warna chrome tu cukup sepadan menjadi pinang dibelah dua... cantik bro! Tambah lagi ada tompok bulat di situ untuk mengimbangi ruang negatif. Selamat berfotografi.

Ramdan.

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• trekks (13597)
• [2008-11-18 20:44]
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hi rigz

I think this is your best composition so far. Very good observation and I can see you are moving forward with photography. You chose a good POV for this shot. I have been to this place but it was not yet open for business.

Perhaps I may comment that you can try to crop out the blue on top of the stone column. (it is subjective if you wish to close out the blue circle on the wall - it may or may not be your choice).

I would include a bit more of column and less of the space at left.

Try to handle the shadow below the landing.

tfs, bill

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• rewshearer (20829)
• [2008-11-19 0:37]
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Nice shot! Good subject, good light-and-shadow and good sharp details. I'm not quite so keen on the blue element at the very top right of the frame, I feel that could have been cropped away - but the shot works in my opinion.
Rew

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• amai26 (726)
• [2008-11-19 4:45]
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Hai rigz,

sia ni pun bukannya seorang arkitek, tapi apa yang sia lihat pada gambar ni memang cun, pilihan composisinya sia suka, pencahayaannya juga menarik. Kombinasi struktur element yang tidak kurang menariknya, Besi, Simen, dan Batu. Walaupun hampir sama ianya tetap berbeza.

TFS

regards
steve

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• safani (21)
• [2008-11-19 6:05]
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• dareco (15143)
• [2008-11-19 6:12]
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Nice work! Artistic and beautiful! I love the vibrant colors. TFS

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• Lano (1031)
• [2008-11-19 18:24]
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Assalammualaikum Rigs,

opss.. satu kelainan yang bagus, saya suka citarasa kau yang ini, menguji komposisi dan pengendalian "metering". yang lain2 sudah disebut oleh kawan2 diatas. :)

good one.

Regards,

Ruslan

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• rminkow (15309)
• [2008-11-21 5:51]

Hi Geoffrey..this is a nice balanced composition..excellent details, light and colors.

Roger

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• boomcat (16869)
• [2008-11-21 22:58]

cantik bah.. terang lagi warna dia ne.. pandai kau cari bahan untuk diambil ah.. sudah cukup bagus ne.. warna dan design tu pun menyerlah.. good one.. excellent eyes.. tfs..

regards, terry

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• wieyos (8970)
• [2008-11-28 4:01]
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ini rupanya imej yang jadi bualan antara saya dengan Ramdan.
pada saya, tembok bata itu adalah subjektif. mungkin juga ia menambah nilai estetik, mungkin juga ia suatu gangguan. bagi saya, dua-dua pun ada.
namun warna latar yang merah itu memberi kekuatan kepada bentuk tangga stainless steel. tahniah!

Salam
Agoes

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• foozi (4596)
• [2008-12-06 22:26]

Salam Geoffrey,
an excellent shot of this architecture. The colours are contrasting and making it very interesting and attractive.
Well captured in its sharp clarity and nice texture.
Good composition, Geoffrey.
I note that youre running very fast...your point is getting fatter.
All the best.

Regards,
Foozi