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• Janone (0)
• [2009-03-17 8:07]

Hello Chin.
Sure Corina is a lovely looking girl and a fine model.
The pose is well choosen too.
Few thing to keep in mind.
Ask her to smile with teeth visible.
Get rid of the unwantewd things in he face and the dirt? on her knee.
A but more suntan would have bee great too.
Cheerd from Jan

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• Adri (11208)
• [2009-03-17 10:10]

Hello Chin,
I fully agree with Jan.

TFS and greetings from Netherlands,
Adri

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• rewshearer (20799)
• [2009-03-17 18:19]

Hi Chin

I think Corina looks very beautiful as she is, her colour is fine too!

The pose is maybe a little artificial, although I really like the angle created by her leg, and especially the way her foot points down towards the corner of the frame, it feels very tidy.

Even so, I think there are more natural ways she could have interacted with the setting.

Nice use of light, nice DOF. Congratulations to you both.

Rew

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• boomcat (16869)
• [2009-03-18 23:39]

nice shot of Corina, Jong.. i don't really know how to critique this one.. all i can she did well with the pose but maybe the leg to high for this pose.. hehehe.. the tree trunk look good..

regards, terry

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• jusninasirun (9790)
• [2009-03-23 20:46]

Hi Jong,

Nice pose to show off that long legs. Sharp in focus and colors are so natural. You can take up pro-portraits now as you handled the light very well.

TFS and best regards,
Jusni