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I just stood there and watched it fall..


I just stood there and watched it fall..
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Copyright: Thong Wing Hoong (Ah_Thong) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 364 W: 74 N: 385] (2485)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-12-27
Categories: Nature
Camera: Olympus C730 UZ
Exposure: f/8, 1/160 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2005-01-06 5:27
Viewed: 699
Points: 18
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
The sun fell down again last night on my anger
The sun fell down again last night on frustration
And on my spite
And I didn't even cry
I didn't even try to stop it at all
I just stood there and watched it fall

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Location : Lido Beach, Johor Bahru, Malaysia.
Time : 6.45pm.
Aperture Priority Mode f/8.0.

Just another simple sunset photo from me, but i just like this photo so much, because of the small boat that was there at the right time.

I like this photo and hope you like it too.
Critiques, Comments and Workshops are welcomed.
-thong-

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beautiful....great capture of rays and silhouette of the boat...if only the top part can be as clear as the water...the noise is spoiling the overall contrast. yet, it's a marvellous shot, Thong!

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  • Miqra Gold Star Critiquer [C: 865 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-01-06 6:21]

Very artistic, Excellent atmosphere you captured, great note -well done!

A nice sunset picture from you Thong. However, if you notice closely the horizon a bit 'senget' (tilted). Good job nevertheless.

p/s: Spice Garden at 17th Jan. Pls respond

Nice! It's a very relax scene!

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  • Pamela Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 413 W: 46 N: 24] (1290)
  • [2005-01-06 10:52]

A nice words from inside....
A beautiful picture, great shot with natural amazing nature colors.
Well done, excellent share.

pamela

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  • zoe Silver Star Critiquer [C: 41 W: 0 N: 7] (168)
  • [2005-01-06 15:47]

Very calm image, filled with this feeling of loneliness in its best way to exist (wich is probably when you need it and it won't hurt you).
Good shot!

Wow! Nice sunset! I agree with you that the boat makes the photo much better. I think you could crop the top of the clouds a bit, as they don't add too much to the photo. Otherwise, great colours and great shot!
Mike

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  • padre Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1419 W: 90 N: 263] (4035)
  • [2005-01-07 10:50]

This is a very nice composition with great natural light. You could stand to straighten the horizon on this one.

Wonderful sunset shot , the colours are beautiful, I like very much the silhouette of the boat. Very well done!

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