the making of a city

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• elihesamian (673)
• [2005-02-03 15:09]
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O!
What a great sketchbook,Eleen!
well worked,fine one,I enjoy it,great one,nicely done,You are patient for this kind of works,congratulation,Eleen.

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• letr (6780)
• [2005-02-03 15:33]
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You have a very creative mind eleen , this shows in your picture to ...very nice !

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• deekay (10)
• [2005-02-03 15:42]
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hi eleen. i think this is pretty cool: first, you seem to have a cool job, then the picture itself is really cool. you captured the lines that are leading directly to the pens. i prefer the orange version because it matches the yellow band with your name and makes it more dynamic. so nice sketch and nice picture :) 2 thumbs up!

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• balkermay (2995)
• [2005-02-03 15:45]
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Especially, I like the design and the colors you have chosen...Excellent work.

Can

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• fotofreak (1763)
• [2005-02-03 16:18]
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I absolutely love it! These colours would go perfectly in my room! The post processing with the paint tool is what really makes this image stand out. I prefer it to the one in the workshop.

Do you have a large version of this? If so...I'd love a copy of it!

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• SylFondacci (14125)
• [2005-02-03 16:31]

Very interesting work, Eleen !
This idea is great, I love drawings.
Sometimes the subject of our post of the day is in front of us, in our immediate daily environment.
And I like a lot this bright orange.
Congrats.
Sylvie

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• jpdeloof (4828)
• [2005-02-03 17:26]

Bonsoir eleen.
Je trouve très belle ta composition, au premier regard je pensais voir un mauvais équilibre à cause des marqueurs en haut, mais non, c'est ok
Beau travail, est-ce les plans de ma maison de papier ?
jp
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Good evening eleen.
I find very beautiful your composition, of the first glance I thought of seeing a bad balance because of the markers in top, but not, it is ok. Is beautiful work, the plans of my paper house?
jp

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• Dingo (11948)
• [2005-02-03 18:27]

I prefer this one, Eleen - the desaturation in the Ws version is too obvious around the markers. Besides, the bright orange does bring some life in that street ;o). Well done, both on the drawing and on the PP work. TFS.

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• ywho79 (570)
• [2005-02-03 18:32]

Great job Eleen. One thing that catches my eye: Rechargable Pens???

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• Werewolf (26142)
• [2005-02-03 23:08]

Well realized! So simples détails but so well disposed... Artistic & personnal! I like that...

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• naturegirl (2014)
• [2005-02-04 3:36]

Photo as well as the sketch are well done.
TFS
Liz

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• hugolef (183)
• [2005-02-04 9:12]

Hi Eleen
A great sketch, i had better the colored version, it gives more life to your pic.
Interesting way of showing your job.
Regards, Hugues

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• Ah_Thong (2485)
• [2005-02-04 12:23]

this is really cool... and the colors are simply amazing. u r the greatest artist ever i ever ever met and ever met.. forever and ever.. whenever.. forever ever.. thanks forever ever ever

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• saintclaude (1599)
• [2005-02-04 12:51]

C'est très beau, Eleen, très graphique, et très précis le travail de post-processing! C'est une belle idée créative, bravo! Claude

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• fireflyz (769)
• [2005-02-05 2:37]

just beautiful Eleen! Good composition, colors and idea! Thanks for sharing..

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• pattyjy (1130)
• [2005-02-08 17:38]

Bravo pour l'originalité Eleen. Il fallait y voir la photogénie. Beau coup d'oeil. Amitiés, Patty.

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• Maru (0)
• [2005-02-12 15:54]

Great sketch and pp work!
I saw the ws and I prefer this version, it's more dynamic, like a nowadays cartoon ;) I think that is because of the upper diagonal you used.
And I love the small detail of your name in the markers.
Congrats

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• Belumpi (133)
• [2005-02-19 12:07]
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Wow, great pic!. I love your style of drawing. Like to see more of that! Very nice to see the combination of the sketch and the real objects!

For what are you making those sketches?

;) Merel