footsteps on the sand?

Critiques [Translate]

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• Ah_Thong (2485)
• [2005-02-12 2:47]

hi eleen,
very nice photo, great artwork, and as usual.. there are lots of meanings and stories inside your photos.. this made every single photo of yours so special and i enjoy watching your photos...

about this photo, interesting shots.. big shoe made from sand...haha.. and IMHO, i would prefer you take closer photo of the shoe..giving more details... and the idea having a real shoe beside it is very nice... and about the PP.. i think its too dreamy and too much this time...

anyway.. this is a really good photo..nice day! -McMug-

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• bfly (1540)
• [2005-02-12 2:51]

hi Eleen,
I liked a lot the shoes in unreal sizes (with ref to each other)...it is really a creative idea..but I think the thick and colored frame attracts attention to itself and right small shoe is almost blending into the blur of the frame)...I think it would also come out very good with a simple thick white frame...
all the best, fusun

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• jpdeloof (4828)
• [2005-02-12 5:30]

bonjour eleen .
Beau cadrage et réalisation, un peu plus de contraste mais c'est très beau ainsi, cela fait plus vieux ;-)
jp
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hello eleen.
Beautiful framing and realization, a little more contrast but it very beautiful, that is thus done older; -)
jp

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• SylFondacci (14125)
• [2005-02-12 16:28]

Nice work, Eleen !
It makes me think to the shoes of a man and a child having walked on the moon ...
Sylvie

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• hojper (4087)
• [2005-02-13 8:44]

Interesting piece of souvenir and a glimpse into the making of a creative soul. Both photo quite honestly look a bit overexposed, but we get the drift, and the framing and the diffuse glow at the edge are nice effects that add to it. Here it is definitely the total and not any individual part that merits credit.

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• letr (6780)
• [2005-02-14 16:32]

I like the contrast here between the hi key shot of the shoes and the framing is good to ..excellent eleen !

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• alvaraalto (1386)
• [2005-02-17 18:28]

Hi eleen,
I discovered that there was more artistic freedom at TL. That attracts me a lot as you could see on my second picture. More possibilities to experiment. But it’s hard to find enough time to do TE and TL both. I discovered that you use the possibilities of TL to all kinds of interesting pictures like this one. We will meet again.

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• gazo (504)
• [2005-03-30 21:29]

I loved your note.
First attemt in creativity,
Never forgotten,
Preciously useful !

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