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something from work
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Copyright: eleen foo (fooeleen) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 478 W: 32 N: 535] (2316)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-03
Categories: HPP [Heavily Post-Processed]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2005-03-23 8:22
Viewed: 768
Points: 24
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
hi all, i feel so uncertain when i logged in to this site after almost a month not posting...i've missed this site a lot, but now that i've got a little more time, i don't know where to begin again....lost the momentum:)

anyway, looked thru all my photos, i did not have time to take any this past month....it was a disasterous month, with no sleep most of the time. i did not have anything i fancy to post....so here i am, something from my project where i've spent many sleepless nights on....

this is a simple 3d rendering of a bedroom from my project, a housing scheme incorporating nature and water as the theme, most of my work are hand drawn sketches, just a few perspectives are rendered with computer softwares because it takes a lot more patience and time.

a little pp with photoshop, posted the original as ws.

i wish to share my work with u guys. hope u like it. shall be back more often when everything's done. take care and have a great time!

jpdeloof, tommy, alagoa, vheus, DAM, Ah_Thong, WALTERito, erdna, fireflyz has marked this note useful
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To WALTERito: hi Walter, guess i'm back:)fooeleen 1 03-29 10:05
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welcome back
nice work here

Bonjour Eleen, un bien beau travail pour ce retour, bien réussi. Tu as beaucoup de talent. Maintenant c'est moi qui part pour quelques temps, c'est indéfini. Bon courage.
JP
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Hello Eleen, a good beautiful work for this return, well successful. You have much talent. Maintaining it is me which leaves for a few times, it is indefinite.
Good courage.
JP

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  • tommy Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 171 W: 0 N: 28] (202)
  • [2005-03-23 11:57]
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Hello Eleen,

This is a very well designed bedroom, I would have liked to see it as a render, I imagine 3d studio max or some program of that nature (assumption) yet I do like how you applied the filter and displaced the details on this image. TFS and I am looking forward to your future post.

Regards
Akim

I'm glad you're back!!! It's like that sometimes, work just takes over and there's just no time left for ourselves ;-)
The project looks good!
Ana

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  • vheus Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 62 W: 18 N: 27] (249)
  • [2005-03-23 17:21]
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very creative work Eleen,
i liked it...
strong project...
thank you for sharing and,
bravo...

Hallo Eleen,
Good to see you back. Good re-entrance too. I like this artist impression more than the rather sterile “SIMS” rendering.
Groet Rob

hi eleen, nice to see you back in treklens... very nice photo here.. very nice post-processing.. and the filters, effects and adjustment..all works very well and created a very great piece of artwork.. expressive and nice... you really have a great design heart..

hope to see more photos from u ...
-thong-

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  • Dingo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2743 W: 369 N: 2624] (11948)
  • [2005-03-24 17:47]
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I really like the effects you applied, Eleen. They really add to the work, I think the original in the WS is a bit 'smooth'. TFS.

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  • DAM Gold Star Critiquer [C: 513 W: 67 N: 268] (1110)
  • [2005-03-25 12:28]

Outstanding detail to your work. Thanks for sharing it with us. Love the colour and how you combined nature in the surrounding. Welcome back.

To see your name appear again made me smile. SO that's good for a point already ;-)
Compared to the original your PP looks brighter and warmer (I'd rather use this for the project than the rendered version which is very "straight") Perhaps this is the way it meant to be...?
As for the interior-designer-bit : Why not choose a pastel-green ceiling which would give a soothing atmosphere, while contrasting with the orange tones around the bed... ? An extra lightsource should be provided then, like a PAR36 (narrow beam) spot pointed at the vase on the table.
Sure 2 C U around again ;-)
TFS

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  • erdna Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 629 W: 68 N: 746] (5421)
  • [2005-03-29 15:49]

Hi, Eleen, Both presentations are good computer generated perspectives, all are too rigid and stiff compared to freehand presentation drawings, though sometimes you are forced to do this because of the client or the "Boss" itself. I remember commenting on one of your drawing, a sketch, a "quickie" work. I prefer that but with a little refinement. Funny I am not commenting on your photo but on your work, you asked for it didn't you? Design wise I am not fond of the hard wood framed landing around the bed. You cannot just jump on to bed as you may hurt your shin bones. Good job, you are hired.

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  • hojper Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 687 W: 111 N: 847] (4087)
  • [2005-04-02 17:01]

Wow, this is really one where I hesitate between original and PP version. I like the PP script a lot, but I also find that the original photo has a very special atmosphere that does not necessarily need enhancing. Two greats for the price of one. And your work looks great too.

Very nice artwork Eleen! This proves what I said about you further that you are very talented! Great perspective and color scheme. Very well done! TFS..
Cheers,
Skye

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