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How Do I Look ???


How Do I Look ???
Photo Information
Copyright: Bernard Lieu (bernard_lieu) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 11 W: 16 N: 30] (269)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-09-21
Categories: Artwork
Camera: Nikon D-70s, Nikon AF-S 18-70mm f/3.5-4.5 DX IF-ED, Compact Flash 1 GB, hoya UV(0) 67mm
Exposure: f/11, 1/100 seconds
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-09-27 7:38
Viewed: 207
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is the first time i'v being exposed to studio photography, guess i still got long way to go. Gosh... Anyone, please let me know how to improve my skill by looking at this photo. As I hardly take portrait. By the way glad to have this model post up for me and have patient on me....
And thanks for my mentor teach and guide me with the lighting system.

Hope you all like this photo.
Please comment if you all found anything that can help me shappen my skill.

Regards,
Bernard

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To niraj: hai therebernard_lieu 1 09-27 18:00
To zarozinia: hai angibernard_lieu 1 09-27 17:50
To rewshearer: hai therebernard_lieu 1 09-27 17:47
To rminkow: hai therebernard_lieu 1 09-27 09:31
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Hi Bernard...beautiful shot...great light and tones...excellent.

Roger

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  • niraj Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 183 W: 3 N: 96] (2042)
  • [2009-09-27 9:52]
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Hello Bernard,
Looks to me like a professional work. really, if you are not then this is what you should try your hand at. I cant give any critique in this photo, simply because its really very good. All the best

Did you set up the lighting, or was it set for you?

The key light and the background light are perfectly set and the exposure and camera settings are spot-on.

Really the studio setup here is good, professional indeed, and the model seems to know what she's doing, too.

Professional looking work.
Rew

Wonderful image.
The area to the right of her breast area in the background I feel is slightly too light and distracting, if you darkened it down slightly Im sure it would be perfect.
Angi

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