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Some Plastic Bags, A Girl and A Camera


Some Plastic Bags, A Girl and A Camera
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Copyright: Thong Wing Hoong (Ah_Thong) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 364 W: 74 N: 385] (2485)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-03-25
Categories: Friends/Family, Portrait
Camera: Nikon D70
Exposure: f/4.5, 1/10 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-03-31 21:45
Viewed: 900
Points: 32
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hi all, another photo of my girlfriend, reviewing her photos... i posted one few days ago here.

This one is a little bit different, different composition, different lighting... and also i use photoshop to alter the curve and color balance. The original photo is very 'red-dish'..because of the natural at that place. hope it looks ok now on this photo..

Comments, Critiques and Workshops are welcomed.
-thong-

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  • Klaud Gold Star Critiquer [C: 107 W: 5 N: 124] (1762)
  • [2005-03-31 22:19]

Superbe shot!
I like the smooth saturation, She look very concentrated at her photography, and the sofr color add mood to it!

Very nice ;-))))

I really like this one. I love how you've taken a photo of her in a very unposed way, with the shopping bags hanging off her arm, and the colour balance is weird, a little turquoise, which combined with the slight blur, gives a very cool, stylish look that complements her not-posing very nicely! it's really excellent, i'd like to get this effect.

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  • mukesh Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 691 W: 102 N: 435] (4791)
  • [2005-03-31 23:20]

You've caught a good moment. Very apt lighting and colour - quite reflective of mood. There is an overall feeling of tenderness.

nice lighting, thong. i think it compliments the green of her shirt and the wall behind her. also, you created a nice glow on her skin and i like the crop!

This looks very nice!I also liked the other one,but as you say they are the same but at the same time... different.I like this one too.Love the casual look.The composition is great,your girlfriend is an excellent model and the pp work you've done is also great!That means this is...perfect!
Raquel

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  • padre Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1419 W: 90 N: 263] (4035)
  • [2005-04-01 9:49]

I like this one Thong. The tint works very well, the lighting is good and the smooth texture of her skin against the strong texture of the wall is a great contrast. Nicely done, B

i like this one for the hue and the warm tones. caught unnoticed, very good composition, and what a great model...hahhahah.

This is great! the lighting is perfect. The composition is very good too! I finally realized who your girlfriend is too. :) Very nice photo! JP

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  • zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 946 W: 120 N: 59] (262)
  • [2005-04-01 12:45]

Beautifull Thong. What i like most with both these pictures are the contrast between her softness and the roughness of the wall. She becomes very much alive and vournable.

Pastel tones work well here...I like the composition and the expression of your model...Excellent work...

Can

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  • hftey Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 75 W: 3 N: 32] (328)
  • [2005-04-03 8:12]

Love the tone and the natural feel of the photo I love it... The plastic bag is a bit confusing for me, so she went for a shopping spree and at the same time took pictures with you? :)

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  • puffy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1791 W: 128 N: 3006] (16617)
  • [2005-04-03 21:52]

Very well done Thong, I love the PP work you have done with it, excellent! You have also captured her concentraction. Colours tone and lighting is great. Excellent shot! Thanks for sharing.

Excellent portrait, beautiful tones.
Best regards,
Carmem

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  • DAM Gold Star Critiquer [C: 513 W: 67 N: 268] (1110)
  • [2005-04-05 14:53]

Thong.. I think you are on the right track. I really like working on portraits. So I have done a bit of WS for you. She is worth of giving a lot of attention :) Hope you enjoy it. Nice colours... and effects pal.

I also like this one. These two shots are better than each other.
Congrats..

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  • jbate Gold Star Critiquer [C: 126 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-05-11 15:38]

I really like the photograph very much. Photographs of people are one of my favourites, especially when they are unaware they are being photographed. Hope you don't mind a little criticism intended to be helpful. I would crop much of the area above the girl and a little to her left. That would serve to focus all attention directly on the beautiful young lady.

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