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Hanging on the edge


Hanging on the edge
Photo Information
Copyright: Jusni Nasirun (jusninasirun) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1020 W: 97 N: 1764] (8558)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-05-28
Categories: Nature
Camera: Nikon D80, Sigma 70-300mm f/4-5.6 APO DG Macro
Exposure: f/4, 1/125 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-07-09 3:59
Viewed: 284
Points: 51
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hello friends in TL,

I am attracted to this flower with very nice shape and color. The butterfly perching on the edge is an added bonus to the composition. Thanks for viewing.


WORK FLOW
Shot JPEG fine
Export to TIFF in CS3 - Tweaks with Level and Curves.
USM (100,0.9,22) SS (100, 0.4)
Resized, convert to 8bit JPEG and framed.



EXIF Data
Make NIKON CORPORATION
Model NIKON D80
Software Adobe Photoshop CS3 Windows
Exposure Time 1/125
F-Stop f/4.0
ISO Speed Ratings 100
Focal Length 70 mm
Date Taken 2008-05-28 13:51
Metering Mode Pattern
File Size 178 kb
© jusni nasirun 2008

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merhaba dear jusni
wonderful light and colours.wonderful lovely flowers and composition.well done my friend.
best regards.
gürkan akçakır.

Hola Jusni.
Fabuloso colorido y excelente presentación.
Saludos, JL.

Hi jusni:
I like several things immediatly here...
the color contrast is lovely...
and I like when I see the capture info because it gives me a better understanding of the work presented!!!
Regards
David

Junsi Hi;
That is an amazing flower. I learn so much about our world and photography from you and all of TL. The colors of your compositions are stunning and the butterfly really adds to your image.
Congratulations, very well done.
Larry
USA-tfs

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  • Dot Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 919 W: 0 N: 1453] (6414)
  • [2008-07-09 6:12]

HI Jusni
It is really a beautiful flower, and the butterfly blends in well with it.
A shot with nice dof, giving good contrast.
Dot

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  • clic Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 712 W: 0 N: 172] (4169)
  • [2008-07-09 6:18]

Bonjour Jusni
J'y vois un dôme éclatant de couleur, très bien visible devant cet arrière-plan hors-foyer, qui me fait penser à un arbre de Noel!
Ses formes délicates sont bien attrayantes.
Amicalement.
Robert

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  • subs Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 174 W: 0 N: 124] (1357)
  • [2008-07-09 7:21]

Hi Jusni,
Very interesting clump of flowers. Nice contrast of colours too.
Regards,
Subashini

hi Jusni

The butterfly is really not easy to spot because it is far away below and the layers of red flowers are more prominent. But the shot shows how you have waited for the right moment. I like the color tones.

tfs, bill

Beautifull composition my friend,
very atractive image, excellent done!
TFS

Have a nice day!

Hello Jusni,

An interesting flower, for sure not to be found in my garden..!
Very attractive colour palette, and the red flowers contrast so well with the greenery in the background...
The DoF works well in isolating the subject from the back!

Greetings,
Pablo -

ciao Jusni..
colours are a beauty here.. and you have taken them with the right BG that exalts details!! simple and nice!! many thanks
greetings from Bergen (Norway) ;))
ciao Marco

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  • rigz Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 159 W: 0 N: 78] (1011)
  • [2008-07-09 20:54]

Assalamuallaikum,

Nice composition. I like the details and it very contrasting with the background. Great efforts and shot.

Regards,

Geoffrey Bin Ramji

Assalammualaikum Jusni,
It must have been the bell shape and how it's formed by the florets which drew your attention. And what draws one's attention, might not be to others even though the subject has all the qualities in the making of a good subject. The reason why a subject is taken tells something about the person who took it.

Wassalam
Rabani

It took me a while to spot the butterfly - a nice touch, as you say!

A very 'busy' shot, both subject and background has a lot of detail, and I have to wonder if the subject would have looked better with more zoom (for shallow DOF and a softer background.) Actually if you had a prime lens, say the 50mm f/1.8, you would get that effect also.

Nice colours and detail.

Rew

not an easy subject to capture but you did well, bro.. i saw this flower many times but never bother to capture it.. hehe terlalu besar..

well composed with lovely bright colours.. tfs..

regards, terry

Assalamualaikum Jusni,

it's a bell shape or a pyramid or a christmas tree and beautifully in red against the green BG. only realised the b'fly presence after reading the note.

kalaulah boleh dicantas pokok-pokok di BG nya supaya tak mengganggu....hehehehe

TFS
Regards
Agoes

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  • Janone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3445 W: 96 N: 3039] (19582)
  • [2008-07-10 2:39]

Selamat Paki, dear Jusni.
Yeh.. Beautiful flowers they are. The contrast between the greens always make you looking to these flowers in the bushes.
The Butterfly adds even more interst to it.
Have nice day.
Jan

Asalamamualaikum Bro Jusni,
Lama tak masuk TL..pegi mana Bro?...Sibuk kah Bro?...hehe
Oya tentang foto nie..Rating personal aku bro..5/5..color dan main subject nya standout,angle cantik,ketajaman foto dan control cahaya juga bagus serta bg yang difikirkan sesuai dengan distance nya juga pass..Keseluhuran hasilnya cantik..

CM

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  • Romeu Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 292 W: 0 N: 152] (1411)
  • [2008-07-10 2:59]

Hi Jusni,

great capture! The light, colors and caomposition, looks amazing!

Congratulations my friend,
Romeu
Later

Hi Jusni,

Excellent composition. Good exposure and very clear details. Nicely done with the butterfly bonus.

TFS.

Regards,
Alvin

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  • Koala Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 388 W: 19 N: 74] (2696)
  • [2008-07-13 1:25]

This is one interesting and beautiful plant!
Colors are good and so is the light and i really like it.
And that butterfly is GREAT!!!!!

Have a nice day!

Alexandra

Hi Jusni,
Beautiful composition, good colors.
Best regards,
Ralf

hello Jusni,
Wow, what an impressive cluster of deep orange flowers and so well contrasted against the bottle green of the BG.
Great light and very well done, Jusni, as per your usual standards.
Take care, Joni

Jusni

belleza de flor colores muy peculiares bien logrado

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  • emka Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 128 W: 0 N: 67] (1079)
  • [2008-07-17 23:58]

Hi Jusni,

Splendid flower! Nice macroshot with butterfly. Wonderful colours.

Malgorzata

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  • ayse51 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1148 W: 62 N: 807] (12555)
  • [2008-07-18 6:34]

Hi Jusni,
beautiful flower.I have never seen before.Nice framing and well composed.TFS.Necla.

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