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Take 5 On Track


Take 5 On Track
Photo Information
Copyright: Haji Karim Ibnu Badigol Sood (hjxkarim) (21)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-10-25
Categories: Nature
Camera: Nikon D70s Digital SLR
Exposure: f/4.2, 1/13 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-11-12 20:57
Viewed: 295
Points: 2
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Engine: D70s + Nikon 18-70mm f/3.5-4.5

Location:On track. Gunung Gajah Terom, Kuala Berang. Terengganu. Malaysia.

Dear all, can someone give me a comment/critiques with some technical tips. Personally on me i still not satisfied for this photo, so next time i wish to have like this snap again. Thanxs

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Assalamualaikum Tuan Haji,

Only you know what subject(s) you really wanted to highlight here - is it the cannister can at the bottom right, the drinking bottle cap at the bottom left, the Bunsen burner & the cooking utensils, the photographer who was aiming at you, or the passive people at the back. too many subjects are competing for an attention here but none has got one.

as a learner I do wish there were friends here to drop by and give the right comment/critique.

Salam
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  • rigz Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 161 W: 0 N: 85] (1068)
  • [2008-11-15 4:36]

Assalamuallaikum Tuan Haji,

Agreed with Agoes. To me...i think u wanted to highlight the Bunsen burner & the cooking utensils. Its referred on your focusing. Anyway its a good shot to share. Well done!

TFS,
Geoffrey Bin Ramji

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