The Questioning Stare

Critiques [Translate]

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• wieyos (8970)
• [2008-11-17 21:33]

Happy 1st Anniv on TL, Ndan. i may forget the date, but i will always remember that you were responsible for bringing me in here.

a cute blank look of Raziq, indeed. love his shining eyes and the DOF is very effective.

looking forward to viewing your great shots in this second year and beyond.

Salam
Agoes

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• nipunjotsoni (836)
• [2008-11-17 21:55]

so sweet expressions..
very innocent..
great capture Ramdan...
TFS
regards
nipun

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• ayse51 (20496)
• [2008-11-17 22:07]

Assalamualikum Randan,
congratulation your second year.Beautiful portrait of Raziq.I liked him so much.TFS.Necla.

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• rewshearer (20927)
• [2008-11-17 23:06]
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Very nice work with the lighting here Ramdan! I really can't fault it, it looks natural and is beautifully balanced.

If I had any criticism it will be the background - a little busy and distracting perhaps, and of course his blurred sister on the left - is there any reason why you didn't crop it down?

Those things aside, a great shot - you managed the light and sharpness beautifully!

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• amai26 (726)
• [2008-11-18 0:10]
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Tobpinai,

Selamat ke Tahun ke-2 di TL, semoga banyak lagi gambar2 yang cun2 dan power2 untuk dikongsikan bersama kawan-kawan yang banyak lagi mau belajar....hehhehe, tetapi bila terlampau power, mau hilang "balance" juga untuk beberapa saat.

TFS

Regards
steve

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• tsesler (6301)
• [2008-11-18 0:28]
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Happy anniversary on TL Ramdan,
what an expression you caught on Raziq's lovely face;)
excellent portrait with great dof and beautiful light here,
welldone and tfs,
i wish you many more wonderful years and postings,
warm regards,
Taner

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• Janone (0)
• [2008-11-18 2:52]

Selamat Paki dear Ramdan.
As I readed your note, I understand it was not just a quick snapshot of your son Raziq.
The light on his face is perfect, his questioned eyes tells the story.
Hard to say if your daughter is too prominent in it, maybe a bit less shoulder and a 'glimbs of her face in it ?
Nevertheless, little Raziq is looking GREAT.! HAHA.
Best regards, Jan

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• rigz (1066)
• [2008-11-18 15:53]

Assalamuallaikum Ramdan,

I like his expression. Looks very concerntrate...try to understand. Moment nicely photographed and composed. Congrats!

TFS,
Geoffrey Bin Ramji

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• trekks (13631)
• [2008-11-18 20:19]

hi Ramdan

A great portrait shot and good light control - it is very difficult to shoot a toddler. This post gives me an idea. Otherwise you can try to put up a backdrop using clothes hanger with a cloth to hide your background of the house. Good bokeh.

And looking forward to your 2nd year of postings.

tfs, bill

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• kross1 (4376)
• [2008-11-19 10:13]

Hi Ramdan,
WOW waht a cute little boy. You are a lucky dad. This is a very nice portrait. Nice sharp image with good color and tones. I like the light in the shot as well. Very nice work Ramdan.
Regards,
Kevin

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• elenarv (394)
• [2008-11-19 11:58]

He is so cute and sweet. You must be really proud. I love this portrait. Amazing expression and great capture. Amazing use of light. Really beautiful
Thank you for sharing
Kind regards
Elena

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• Lano (1031)
• [2008-11-19 18:27]

Assalammualaikum bosku,

saya suka ini, si raziq serius betul mendengar arahan dari kakaknya..

good potret

Regards,

Ruslan

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• rminkow (15481)
• [2008-11-26 21:29]

Hi Ramdan..this is a nice portrait of this cute baby...great details nice light.

Roger