Sunset & Photographer

Critiques [Translate]

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• banaei (774)
• [2008-11-29 20:59]

Hi Ramdan,
Very nice warm colours
All the best
TFS
**MAB**

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• AndroK (11750)
• [2008-11-29 22:57]

Hi Ramdan...
Very good portrait with nice light...
Nice sunset...
Regards...
Andro

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• Lano (1031)
• [2008-11-30 1:05]

Assalammualaikum bosku, good experimentel work with your remote flash, the sunset color is nice and the rear sync is work well too, about the model maybe he need to be more natural looks he he he masam sia pernah jumpa ini orang tau :)

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• wieyos (8970)
• [2008-11-30 3:48]

Salam Ndan,

konsep pencahayaan yang sangat SEMPURNA. modelnya pun lumayan hebat.....:)

nama pun outing, jadi sebenarnya inda lah seberapa bersedia untuk main-main flash kan.

barangkali akan lebih dramatik kalau cahaya tu sedikit kekuningan keemasan untuk menepati nuansa kehangatan senja. kalau cahaya putih begini, nampak macam suluhan dari lampu kereta di depan si model ni.

sekadar pendapatan ja....sendiri belum pandai main lampu.

pasal ke simpang mengayau, bisuk kita binsang.

pasal Diamond Princess tu memang sudah ku nampak sejak hari ia berlabuh lagi.

bah, balik kepada gambal yang ini.....sememangnya bagus!

Salam
Agoes

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• espanek (6616)
• [2008-11-30 6:32]

Hello Ramdan.
Nice portrait with a lovely colours of a b/g.
I like the way you managed the light here.
Good results of your experiment.
TFS
Wojciech

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• rewshearer (20905)
• [2008-11-30 14:47]

Good work overall here mate! Not easy to balance natural light with flash, you did a very good job overall.

The slave flash light is a little harsh - I think if you moved it further away the light would be more diffuse and more evenly spread, creating softer shadows?

Rew

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• HeadlessGuy (2149)
• [2008-11-30 19:19]

Great shot. Beautiful backdrop!

I like the light even though it is a little bit harsh.

I don't think moving the flash back would make it less harsh as that would only decrease the size of the light source compared to the subject. Maybe you could have turned one of those white tables on its side and bounced the flash of that. That would have made the light more diffused and also provided you with a much bigger light source to give more of a wrap around your subject.

I think the white table he is sitting at is a little too attention seeking. Maybe a pose with him and his camera an his tripod looking into the sunset?

Thanks,
Jens

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• rigz (1066)
• [2008-12-01 16:52]

Assalamuallaikum Ramdan,

Nothing to comments. 2 points for this great shot. Congrats!

TFS,
Geoffrey Bin Ramji

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• tracer (7924)
• [2008-12-03 8:10]

yeah i think drinks is better than chasing sunset. just kidding. a perfectly balanced exposure Ramdan.

i a n

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• kross1 (4376)
• [2008-12-04 19:25]

Hi Ramdan,
I like the lighting and the notes explaining the setup. The lighting can be tricky but you have managed it well here. Nice sunset colors in the BG. The slave flash did its job and the subject looks properly lit. Nice work.
Regards,
Kevin

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• cunejo200 (17337)
• [2008-12-09 4:53]

Good optimum lighting here Ramdan. The photographer's face and profile as well as the beautiful colors from the setting sun are well captured. Well done and best regards...Danilo

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• nipunjotsoni (836)
• [2008-12-09 7:29]

hello ramdan..
this looks really great.
Color combinations are really great..
tfs
regards
nipun

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• amai26 (726)
• [2008-12-09 18:12]

hai,

heheheheh...macam pernah ku lihat wajah model nya ini tapi dimana ya?

sudah pun memang nama xperimen, tapi sia punya "pendapatan" memang suda sukup bagus dan tampan model nya...hehehe

Kawan kau...

steve

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• manujmehta (11904)
• [2008-12-23 1:23]

hello Ram
how are you doing friend?
what a fantastic view my friend
you have captured both the subjects well. i love the sunset at the back with the photographer at the font. nice colours and expouser in this light
good work mate

regards
Manuj Mehta

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• foozi (4608)
• [2008-12-31 22:29]

Salam Ramdan,
a lovely experiment. At least I could see Ruslan in better view. Good lighting effect and it helps in enhancing the subject.

regards,
Foozi

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• jusninasirun (9790)
• [2009-01-16 17:19]

Salam Ramdan,

Your slave have served you really well with the subject really pops here. Been a while and I( noticed many excellent addition to your already excellent collection of images. TFS and have a wonderful weekend.

Jusni