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Left Behind
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Copyright: Lawrence Primus (law) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 509 W: 75 N: 80] (1764)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-08-16
Categories: Daily Life, Mood
Camera: Nikon Coolpix 3200
Exposure: f/3.7
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): aNyThInG eXtReMeLy uNiQuE [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2005-08-16 7:02
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Favorites: 2 [view]
Points: 64
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Hi Lawrence

I like the tight framing & contrast in textures between the thong / sandal, & leaves. Well done!

you caought the beautiful 'sweet' light, interesting image, well done, (*_*)

Very sharp indeed and beautiful light. The sand grain particles on the sandal do convey your meaning quite succinctly. Well seen and shot. TFS.

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  • padre Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1419 W: 90 N: 263] (4035)
  • [2005-08-16 10:14]
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This is an almost archtypal image Lawrence! What kid hasn't had this happen! Nice, B

Nice and sharp details and a good composition Lawrence.
I would have read about the story of the photo!!! :)

cheers
ToM

Simple, fun, and beautiful.

Hi Lawrence,
very nice photo, and crispy sharp. It is very simple, yet captivating...needless to say, I love the colours and the mood!
regards,
Marija

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  • wck Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 757 W: 37 N: 423] (3843)
  • [2005-08-16 21:08]
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Simple texture & lighting combination.
Well done.

Dari budak lin si

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  • erdna Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 629 W: 68 N: 747] (5425)
  • [2005-08-16 23:23]
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Very nice, very sharp picture of leaves and a sandal. technically it is very good. The composition is also well done.

Andre'

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  • jafsc Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 504 W: 53 N: 88] (4621)
  • [2005-08-17 3:20]

Very nice composition and a magnificent work with light! The touch with dead leaves is formidable, Bravo Lawerence!
jas

Hi Lawrence,

I'm with ChrisJ, the tight frame and colours make the photo pleasing to the eye.
Well done!

Very nice composition and great light & colours in this one, Lawrence. I like the shadow of the strap of the sandal with the leaves beside it like the sandal was abandonned over the fall after a great summer. Well done!

Beautiful picture Lawrence, a very nice composition. We feel the summer holidays in your picture, very nice details.
Best regards
Guy

Nice shot, Lawrence! Good sharpness, nice colours and great composition. Excellent!

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  • amm Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 227 W: 29 N: 86] (634)
  • [2005-08-19 14:52]
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Nice shot Lawrence! Very nice composition and great light & colours. Beautiful, thanks to sharing.
I wait to read your note;:)) why not?
amm

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  • rui Gold Star Critiquer [C: 279 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-08-21 7:46]
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Hi law !
Rui

Wonderful, Lawrence! Such great detail - I could be standing there! Love the colors, lighting, shadows, shapes, everything! Excellent job!
Gayle

This is a nice "nature morte" with a good colors and precision.
And also a great dedication to this type of shoes certainly the best sales in the whole world :-)
Jean Michel

Shadows, textures, colors..all in a moody composition that summer is over and fall is here. Beautifully done.....:O)

Lawrence,
besides the very pleasing composition,
it is the texture that makes this picture for me.
There is the close regular rib of the sandal, the grit of sand, stone and smoothness of the upturned leaves, and lastly the veined undersurface of the broken leaf. Just lovely.
Regards
David Harmer

This is so well thought of, seen and captured. I like the mood it creates. Good light work on this excellent composition. i like this.

A very evocative shot, Lawrence, particularly as we are heading toward Fall. The muted colours work well here and the sharpness is just right - not excessive.

Love this!!!!
Great colors, shadows, sharpness.
Nice blend of design and texture.
Gee...


Maybe we should start a flip flop theme??

What an great shot idea and composition.
Good colours and sharpness.

hi lawrence,
the light here is very spectacular and so the shadows are very pretty.the compo is so simple but rich enough with the leaves.for the unity of the sandal, I got the feeling of being abandoned.congratulations,
regards

So melancholy...beautiful :)

very nice composition.

Regards,

Tom

Perfect for me...
Tomasz

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  • edie Gold Star Critiquer [C: 659 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-10-22 11:48]
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Very nice detail and warm delicate colourtones,great composition,bravo!
Edie

wonderful expressive photo, colors are great also, well composed nice job,
Christine.

Hi Lawrence,
lovely soft light and moody composition.
i really like this shot and its mood.
many TFS
ili

Hi! Lawrence,

What caught my attention here was the side lighting effect on the ribbed insole, similar to the effect of the tide on sand. This gave a "Land of the Giants"(Tv Series 80's) effect to the scale of the flip flop. I am never that brave enough to give this size of a white boarder, but it works so well here.
The composition and content is so simple yet so effective and I really took to it straight off.
Well seen and directed! TFS. and thanks for your critique.

Mike.

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