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Working All Day


Working All Day
Photo Information
Copyright: Alex de Graaff (A-lex) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 117 W: 52 N: 244] (2000)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-08-15
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Canon 350 D
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/800 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-01-30 5:24
Viewed: 545
Points: 22
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Taken from the bus during my trip in Nepal.
I had just time for one shot so I could not get a photo with another composition. I know its not always good to have the main subject in the middle of the photo but I liked it that much that I wanted to post it. Hope you agree with me on this.

Alex
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Great composition and framing
Marc

  • Great 
  • OWO Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 197 W: 71 N: 334] (2335)
  • [2008-01-30 5:39]

Hi Alex,

Agree with pozaru on the composition. Love the green color, it jumps of my screen. Would like to see the origina uncropped version, maybe you can post it as a WS later?

Best regards,

Edwin

Great shot. The lines in the field help the eye travel throughout the composition, so having the people in the center is not a problem. Love the lush green and texture. Well done:)

Hello Alex!
Fantastic green composition and perfect detail!
Great light!
Best regards!
Lili

wonderful green with the red at the centre. why of so small resolution brother. i think you have cropped out much from all sides
indrajit

Well since you took it from your bus it is a great shot. I think you have cropped the top to remove distractions. Try using the wrap function in PS to fix it.

Rajib

  • Great 
  • S-moon Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 252 W: 29 N: 238] (1529)
  • [2008-01-30 10:13]

Hi Alex,

Prachtige groene kleuren! Ik vind lijnen die door het veld lopen erg mooi en de mensen in het midden staan precies goed. Dit omdat ze in het verlengde van de lijn staan waardoor ze in de lijn passen. Ook de kleur van de mensen is een leuke onderbreking van de lijn.
Goed gezien en gedaan!

TFS -X- Simone

Helemaal mee eens.
Groetjes
Cynthia

This is my favorite of the ones I have seen on my first day. I love the luscious greens and the composition and the rows make the shot. Love the colors on the people too

  • Great 
  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3348 W: 688 N: 1921] (16125)
  • [2008-01-31 1:17]

I'm not a big fan of centered compos but I think it works because they look lost in the big field.
Wonderful contrasting colors.


thanks,
v
ps.I'll be back with points

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 990 W: 0 N: 771] (8503)
  • [2008-01-31 14:01]

Een beetje kleine maar wel supermooi!
jan

  • Great 
  • k-2 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 638 W: 6 N: 428] (2746)
  • [2008-02-25 19:00]

Composition is fine. The diagonals leading to the people are great. Well seen and captured. TFS. K2

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