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Aarati


Aarati
Photo Information
Copyright: bishwas bajracharya (bishwas) (11)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-10-01
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/7.1, 1/2 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-09-08 20:52
Viewed: 194
Points: 1
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Local women lighting butterlamp in evening.
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Hi,

nice, moody attempt. Interesting central composition with strong accent on the fire. There are some issues though - main is that the colour is a bit unnatural; it's oversaturated. Looks like you kept daylight settings of the camera while shooting very warm light source. Another issue is slight overexposition pulling out unnecessary details from the background. I made a workshop correcting them. Color is more natural imo and darkening surrounding gives more focus to central scene. Please check it.

Marek

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