The yellow Bird **for Zahoor Ahmed**

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• ele_eng (6050)
• [2009-07-21 3:26]

Salam Jahanzeib
You've done a good Hunting job here!
By your POV and those destracting branches in foreground, it seems you hide yourself very well and were used maximum focal lenght of your lens.
The focus is good but not perfect. great Bokeh of BG
Best wishes
Alireza

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• manujmehta (11904)
• [2009-07-21 3:27]

hello JZM
how are you doing?
nice shot
sharp with fine focus
good dof, i hope you have captured this bird with different pov too
thanks for sharing

regards
Manuj MEhta

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• cunejo200 (17317)
• [2009-07-21 4:02]

Jahanzeib,
A fine avian photo. The diagonal from the perching stick is nice, the bokeh attractive, and there is good sharpness on the bird; however, the branch to the right can perhaps be cropped. Good to hear that you met with Zahoor, a much admired photographer. Cheers.
Danilo

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• AndroK (11740)
• [2009-07-21 4:25]

Hi jahanzeib...
Nice shot with nice composition...
Nice colors...
Regards...
Andro

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• mamcg (4533)
• [2009-07-21 6:09]
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Salam Jahanzeib Saab,
It is good to come out and shoot what the experts do but here you should not rely on one or two, you must make a pisst behind the viewfinder to get another angle of this beautiful bird.
Regards,
TFS.

Musa.

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• nicou (20496)
• [2009-07-21 7:13]

Hello,

Un bel oiseu sur ce bout de bois, superbe captag animalier, pas facile à réaliser, il faut être leste poru capter ces merveilleux oiseau, quel plumange, superbe.

Merci t amitié

Nicou

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• skhawar (2220)
• [2009-07-21 9:16]

excellent capture,.
Regards,
Khawar

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• rewshearer (20863)
• [2009-07-21 17:32]

An effective tribute to Zahoor, whose images are distinctive and so eyecatching on TrekLens.

I don't know what tips he gave you, but I think you have done well - especially considering your shutter speed was low for the focal length.

Maybe a shame about that stalk just to the right of the bird, it would be nice to have the diagonal of the branch/leaf on which he is perched unbroken, but not much that could be done about that1

Rew

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• daisydaisy (9088)
• [2009-08-07 3:57]

Hi Jahanzeib

A very nice idea and wonderful gift to our friend Zahoor.
Excellent pov for a great diagonale. The focus is very good.
Lovely colours harmony.
Great green bg.
SO cute little bird in a beautiful composition.


All the best
Cheers