Butterfly

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• skhawar (2222)
• [2009-07-30 2:18]
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Beautiful image!nice macro, nice work
great composition.
very well done.
TFS,
Khawar

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• manujmehta (11904)
• [2009-07-30 2:18]
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hello JZM
how are you?
it has given a hint that it has been heavily croped, the punch is missing, though you have got a nice dof and fine light but sharpness is lacking, is there a camera shake?
i like the composition and colours
thanks for sharing

regards
Manuj Mehta

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• avishanmuz (279)
• [2009-07-30 2:36]

AoA

How are you? gr8 image lovely macro shoot im agree wid manujmehta "it loose the sharpness"

But i like the color of beautiful butterfly that give u the ful point in this picture.

Regards
@vi Sh@n

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• Sharpshooter (6922)
• [2009-07-30 2:50]

Hi JZM,
I also think the focus is a bit soft here, definitely has the potential of being sharper. I do like the way you've composed this though, the BG really makes this butterfly stand out.

TFS,
Scott.

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• Royaldevon (16520)
• [2009-07-30 2:57]
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Hello Jahanzeib,

Your own critique explains the lack of sharpness but apart from that, this is a very well composed shot which is a pleasure to scrutinise.
Look how its back legs are moving to grip the plant; it's only holding on with its front legs!
The dof creates a complementary b/g whilst giving the focal images a boost.
I like it.

Kind regards,
Bev :-)

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• mark25 (4630)
• [2009-07-31 2:37]

you NEED a macro lens right now!! but i salute you for your attempt :) this one looks very much like my butterfly photo :)

full marks for attempting it, 4/10 for the pixelated/smudged image.

muhammad muhsin

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• Juliet (13626)
• [2009-08-05 5:36]

Hi JZM,
You've done a really nice job on this macro. It's quite beautiful. The color tones are very attractive, the butterfly has just the right amount of sharpness. Bravo and TFS Julie

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• moody (49)
• [2009-11-07 6:58]
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f/5.6... and great depth of field..... let me know the trick