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The dying day


The dying day
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Copyright: Yasir Nisar (maxloxton) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 142 W: 2 N: 117] (2782)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-04-23
Categories: Daily Life, Nature, Decisive Moment, Experimental, Mood
Camera: Canon EOS 20D, 70-210 mm f/4.0
Exposure: f/4, 1/640 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-08-25 15:13
Viewed: 698
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Finally I completed my one year on TL. I don't know what to say more than this that this one year at TL has developed the photographer in me. Today is very special as my first ever photographic exhibition is also going to held and this is a great milestone for me right now. I have now serious ambitions of doing something serious in photography and hopefully with the guidance of all of you at TL, I will be able to do something worthwhile.

Most of people appreciated my shot of this man and his cattle from the back. Most of them requested that if the front shot is there it would have been much better, for them here is the front shot.

Comments/Critics welcome

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Congratulations with both your exhibition and one year here. Your future seems very exiting.
As to the photo: excellent. The persons appear very natural and the composition and colors are very very nice. DOF is also very nice.
Thank you for sharing this.
-Merete

Congratulations on your milestone. I like this shot a lot. I wish you well on your exhibition as well.

I don't think there's anything I need to say, gorgeous catch, nice colors, clear and sharp foreground.

Overall composition was just alright and the afternoon sun gives full detail of your main subjects which is very pleasing. But the color cast of magenta and yellow seems to fight for supremacy. I made my own version by workshop which I hope you will like it too. Congratulations on your 1st anniversary, and looking forward for more to come. Cheers Yasir.

Thanks/Salamat,
Jeffrey

hello Yasir.
Congratulations for exhibition and one year on TL. And best of Luck for your future.

It is a fantastic shot. Composition is good. the road gives sense of depth.

TFS

Shahbaz

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  • nickmtl Silver Star Critiquer [C: 19 W: 0 N: 0] (197)
  • [2007-10-11 17:29]

I discover the real beautiful pictures of Pakistan through your pictures. The action shots cough my eyes.. and all the other are of highest quality. Congratulation.

Each of your pictures have different things that catch our eyes.. in this one.. the lovely sun colors with the daily life scene and being super sharp as always.

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