Traveler and the Tree

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• urs0114 (4547)
• [2009-07-05 2:04]
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Bonjour Jahanzeib.
Superbe contraste foncé qui donne une bonne ambiance à cette image. Le noir et blanc est parfaitement adapté a ce type d’image,
Bon job, bravo.
Bonne journée.
Urs

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• daisydaisy (9014)
• [2009-07-05 2:16]
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Hi again friend

A strange and so special atmosphere here... Really fantastic like in a movie.
A decisive moment well captured.
Clever idea !

My compliments

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• rewshearer (20701)
• [2009-07-05 2:19]
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An inventive and unusual shot. Your process to create interest in the window is excellent, the flow of light from the outside to the inside is good too.
The black and white treatment works well to keep attention focused on subject and the train journey, rather than distracted by greenery or landscape.
Good job
Rew

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• chrisJ (41877)
• [2009-07-05 3:35]
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Hi Jahanzeib

Good use of a frame within a frame, & not easy to do on a train, so sharpness is pretty good considering. Excellent tonal range & mood. Tfs!

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• cunejo200 (17215)
• [2009-07-05 5:20]
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Congratulations Jahanzeib. I love this double scene and many layers. Superb timing for that regal tree is well framed. The b&w rendition is effective. Best regards...
Danilo

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• jonathanhart (15789)
• [2009-07-05 6:03]
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the duotone is perfect, suits to that fine light study in the wagon, and the outside lonely tree is amazingly ideal
jc

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• moli (11924)
• [2009-07-05 6:44]
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Hello Jahanzeib.
Great picture with atmosphere.
Good choice to show it in Black and White.
Looks like old timmer.
Also train has some story is see.
Regards.
Janek Kloss

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• nasokoun (58)
• [2009-07-05 10:08]
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hello Jahanzeib
a good photographic moment,very fine capture
regards
Nasos

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• Mujahid-Awais (5553)
• [2009-07-05 10:47]
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I am feeling i am in the train. Excellent photograph. Good light. Nice creative work.

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• wilth (1951)
• [2009-07-05 13:28]
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Hello Jahanzeib,
A fascinating and somewhat surreal shot; really very imaginative to take and sparks the imagination to look at.
B&W and other treatments just add to the mood you set.
Very nice lighting and contrast control and excellent composition.
Thanks,
Wilt

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• avishanmuz (277)
• [2009-07-05 20:58]
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Assalam O Alikum

intresting shoot wid unsual sence i like overall image and its give sence of 50 era when there is not color camera.......

Regards
@vi Sh@n

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• Sharpshooter (6920)
• [2009-07-05 23:08]
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Hi JZM,
Awesome shot, the tree really makes this photo in my opinion. Initially I was a bit hesitant about the grain, but the more I look at it, the more I like it. Gives the photo an 'old' feeling. You've composed your brother well too. Excellent work bro.

TFS,
Scott.

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• Ang (96)
• [2009-07-05 23:51]

a great sense of story this picture could tell....

very nice!

cheers!

alan

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• mikolaj_cava (29284)
• [2009-07-07 1:32]

Hello Jahanzeib! Wonderful black and whote image. Excellent scene. Good background. Very good focus. Mysterious shadow. Well done!

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• ashi (568)
• [2009-07-07 20:57]

Well done! I love the fall of light onto the subject inside the carriage. TFS.

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• korbee (13521)
• [2009-08-06 2:52]

Brilliant picture Jahan,this is extremely difficult to do,first of al you are moving,second the bright backlight in your lens...

The compostion of the tree and the traveller with infalling light on his face,its a great mood.
This couldd be a good poster for Pakistan railways,thats for sure.


jan

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• linus (10739)
• [2009-08-23 8:20]

Hi KBE,
A great B&W that I came across accidentally while browsing through TL. Very interesting, to me it tells a story rather than just recording a place or someone. Wel done.
Sunil

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• mugush (1728)
• [2009-09-01 2:47]
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Masterpiece dude.. you have got creative mind..
Keep it up
thanks for sharing
Love
mugush