Hawsbay Beach

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• tanburi (36253)
• [2009-06-24 21:30]
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Hello Syed,
Well captured daily life scene I liked diagonal border of sand and water.
I ve done a WS for you, and hope u like it
TFS
Selahattin E

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• kheshkiwaal (495)
• [2009-06-24 21:42]
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Salamz Shan Muhammad,
Hope you are doing fine, I couldnt reply to most of your comments and I feel bad about that.Your picture is superb in the sense that it brings before the eyes a whole different world,I like the way the bowler is bowlling, and the way that small child is jumping into the sea on the margins of the photo. Light control is good, I like the angle which covers most of the scene.
Regards,
Bravo,
Aamer

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• ghilain (550)
• [2009-06-24 23:57]
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Hello Syed,

Your beaches are the same as ours! :)

Have a nice day

brigitte

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• abidin (241)
• [2009-06-25 1:10]

thats a nice capture avi, and u,ve defined it very well like sky water over the sand... TFS

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• pumpkinman (605)
• [2009-06-25 4:21]

Hi,
A good capture of daily life. The composition is good, but the colour is lacking. As 'tanburi' has done in workshop, it needs increased saturation and contrast to give it a bit more life. Also, the horizon is slightly off, but otherwise good stuff. Hope this helps.
Regards,
Phil

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• crisgotiny (3663)
• [2009-06-25 5:34]

not a bad shot, I like the diagonal line of the shore and those reflected image of boys over the sand. You feel happiness of those boys playing here even in small image :>

tfs
cris(",)

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• jone (28378)
• [2009-06-28 23:16]

Hi Syed ;)
Nice composition and mood...TFS
Best regards,
J ;)