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Water Splash II


Water Splash II
Photo Information
Copyright: Syed Avi Shan Muhammad (avishanmuz) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 65 W: 0 N: 34] (277)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-06-29
Categories: Experimental
Camera: Sony Cybershot DSC-H50
Exposure: f/4, 1/50 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-06-29 6:49
Viewed: 183
Points: 16
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Helo TL Memebers...

Again wid same steup but few small thing is different...

In this picture I'm using Blue curtain now i put the water glass over the white dish... using yellow blub from the right corner for reduce the intensity of the flash i think i got some sucess... but i'm feeling the texture of the glass is not much immpressive as it must be....

Waiting for your valuable comment from your side..


Have fun bros.....!!!!!!!!!!
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To Nesa: thk uavishanmuz 1 07-01 05:24
To abidin: Thanksavishanmuz 1 06-30 00:55
To jan515: thank uavishanmuz 1 06-29 20:19
To tanburi: nice quoteavishanmuz 1 06-29 20:18
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Avi very good experiment I am not expert in such things at all neither i have such good camera yet in my opinion it would have been very good without flash.I can see some harsh lihts on your subject.But I must congratulate and ask you to continue with such experiment till you consider its stasifactory.TFS

Hello Syed,

Nice water action with succession. This time better contrast and details
Bravo...

"All life is an experiment. The more experiments you make the better" Ralph Valdo Emerson


Selahattin E

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  • jan515 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2498 W: 56 N: 3862] (17484)
  • [2009-06-29 14:10]
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Hello Syed,
Woooow, that is fantastic, this moment is perfect like a painting, I likes it very much.
Regards.
Janusz

a very good experimental shot, i agree with all the seniors, try to do this in natural light, hope u,ll get a more fine result and one more thing in my openion....
try to drop what ever ur droping in glass to make splash from centre point so that the whole splash distributes equally on both sides of the glass, i think this will looks more neat...TFS

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  • Nesa Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 59 W: 59 N: 23] (380)
  • [2009-06-30 23:14]
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Hi Avi,
I believe it would look better without white dish otherwise good idea, well captured.
All the best!
ps. lately I am getting busy,...
TFS.
All the best!

hello Syed Avi Shan Muhammad
you have captured the details very well
i liked the effort and the execution of this shot
very nice blue at the back and nice sharpness
good shot
regards
MAnuj Mehta

you your self can find the improvement in this session than of your last attempt.
go on trying and experiment till you are happy with the results.
good wishes.

ASAK Syed. Experimentation and creativity in this shot is commendable. Good colors and composition with appropriate presentation. POV is good but since I have not experimented with still life and action shots with water I cannot give you any worthwhile advice.However there are some resources on the web or photography books to improve on these kind of shots.Allah Hafiz.

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  • ayse51 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1677 W: 124 N: 1431] (20120)
  • [2009-07-28 1:55]

Hi Syed,
congratulations.Great moment you catch.Beautiful colours.TFS.Necla.

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