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Syed Kashif Ahmed Juddi


Syed Kashif Ahmed Juddi
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Copyright: Syed Avi Shan Muhammad (avishanmuz) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 65 W: 0 N: 34] (279)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-08-03
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Sony Cybershot DSC-H50
Exposure: f/3.5, 1/2000 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-08-02 20:15
Viewed: 173
Points: 5
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Here is any portrait of my collection this my brother.. he's working in Saudia Arabia as a Finance Director in the one of the top ten company....

He's apply for the canada immagration and in this picture he practicing the ILESTS test. and im trying to take some shoot... i had a queston wid you veiwer why in this picture laptop screen gives the immpresion that laptop is not in working condition but currently its functioning....

Wait for ur rpl....
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Hello Syed,
Well composed portrait of your brother. Good eye contact and well suited cropping
TFS
Selahattin E

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  • athlon Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 106 W: 3 N: 83] (1340)
  • [2009-08-02 21:55]
  • [2]

Dear S.A.S.Muhammad,

The answer to your question is your harsh light of your flash, it is burst full his power on your brothers face, another thing that it makes the light coming out of the screen of laptop is too low against the light of flash unit.

Now come to your unusual shot, there are two errors that can make this photo a very good composed & balance light shot.

1, the head of your brother is too up from your firing height, 2, if you have a good flash try to bounce the light or other wise put some soft white cloth or a tissue paper on the flash unit, another work can be done, try some card paper to bounce the light toward roof, that will give you very cool light.

As in my opinion the flash photography is totally a different field in the photography.

Abid Changazi

nice portrait! great expression! best of luck to him on passing his test!

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