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Peacock & The well


Peacock & The well
Photo Information
Copyright: Jahanzeib Malik (KBE) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 450 W: 103 N: 593] (2735)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2009-04-12
Categories: Daily Life, Nature, Artwork, Experimental, Mood, HPP [Heavily Post-Processed]
Camera: NIKON D200, Nikkor AF 28-70mm f/3.5-4.5D
Exposure: f/11
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-10-29 0:52
Viewed: 89
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hi Folks

This is the 2nd one of ARTWORK series.
The well's picture was taken in my village the typical village's well in the evening and the peacock photo was taken in Islamabad.

The photo merge/manipulation is done with the help of Photoshop :)

It was the low light situation since the time was after sunset so i've darken the peacock image which was originally in colored.

The peacock in my opinion is not much prominent as it should have been but considering the evening time i guess it goes pretty wel :)


Thanks for viewing have a good day.
Cheers
JZM
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yar jahanzeb honestly speaking, one really has to strain the eyes to spot the peacock in the picture, and thats what i think is the weak point. your title says peacock and the well. the well is well demonstrated but the peacock gets merged or lost with/in the backgound..

perhaps black and white was not a good choice for this one, keeping the peacock in mind.

muhammad muhsin

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  • Dot Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1422 W: 31 N: 3066] (12438)
  • [2009-10-31 7:03]
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Hi Jahanzeb
The pp is well done, however the peacock is a beautiful bird but definitely not easy to spot as it blends in too much with the rest.

Just a suggestion.
Leave everything b&W except the bird leave it in its natural color, it would really stand out. This is a technique often used with B&W and red. The other thing you could do is a split toning on the bird. It would be worthwhile to redo as I think the 2 shots combined would be terrific.

You can find the tutorial for it here.
http://digital-photography-school.com/split-toning-in-
photoshop

Dot

malik the beauty of this picture is its B&w composition.agar koi mor nayn dekh sakda tay oh apni akhian da ilaj karaway.meray khyal wich ay ek sucha moti ay tuhadi gallery wich.Myn kisi ko dishaert nyn kar rehay so koi naraz na huway.apni apni pasand hondi ay.

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