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another photo taken with the gold ring lens...
what you see here is a wall, of a mosque (called 'masjid' in Arabic and Urdu and even Persian)... there was a nice clutter of things lying next to it with some interesting sunlight...
i chose this viewpoint to include a little of everything, from the wall to the dry leaves on the ground to the tree and the distant window on the left :)
adjusted contrasts and tones and made it darker and stronger -- this is the original frame, no crop :)
thanks for viewing :) let's see what you think :)
muhammad muhsin |
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Nice sepia tones, good ligths and textures! Greetings. Fran
An unusual choice of subject - "clutter" - although in this case it works quite well, there's something macabre about it, it looks like bones spilled from an overturned basket?
Not sure if the tree was a worthwhile inclusion in the shot, it doesn't really add anything but does intrude into the shot.
Nice treatment in sepia, although ... I would also like to see it in colour ...
Rew
When I look at this (as I do with most images,) I begin to think, "When Muhammad took this, in his mind he thought, I wonder what the people on TL will have to say about this." I mean you treaded through the dust, you breathed in the air and moved your hands around your camera... such physical effort- it happens here in Canada, in France and over there by you in Pakistan... this 'community' really is brilliant. Such dversity and yet it all ties down.
Beautiful. Again it reminds me of South Africa. Specifically the ugly side to my Grandparents house, where the wall has so much dust blown on it that you can't clean it off. And the cracked dirt. TFS and take care,
Biance.
(Plus, I like this colour style you chose. Very singular.)
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