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Peaches
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Copyright: Pakistan Ek Janoon Ek Ishq (muhammadtariq) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 431 W: 119 N: 610] (2934)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-07-26
Categories: Food
Exposure: f/3.5, 1/10 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-11-04 0:38
Viewed: 94
Points: 24
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
These fresh juicy peaches are from Sawat.These are very sweet and delicious.
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Hi Muhammad
Wonderful capture and idea
Great POV and presentation
Thanks
Burak

Nice lighting and rich colour Muhammed - a good close up!!

I'm not sure what PP you've done but there is a line around the peach on the right that is quite visible - looks like you've 'cut' it out.. Maybe just be a little more careful with the PP?

Cheers
DAvid

Hello Muhammad! Nice peaches, very nice natural light and colours, good sharpness, good focus. Original minimalistic composition. Good luck!

Hi Muhammad

grate shot
i love the pp work
the color tones are amazing
the sharpness as well
a little noise reduction
is also like a halo around first peach you clone it out
but in the end is a grate work
have a beautiful day my friend!
Oana

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  • KBE Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 446 W: 103 N: 582] (2707)
  • [2009-11-04 1:15]

Asalam o Alikum Tariq bhai
Thats a beautiful capture, good exposure and very nice colors.
How about doing a still life with these sweet juicy peaches?
Use some dark b/g and compose ur shot with some adequate space and balance (thats just an opinion about another shot, this one is at its good place)

TFS
Regards,
Jahanzeib

Hello Muhammad,

A really good subject for still life.
Your peaches are well positioned, and colours and detail are good.
There is a strange line round the subjects. Have you blurred the b/g? That could possibly have created the effect.

Kind regards,
Bev :-)

Hello Muhammad,
Good composition , depthness and excellent light
TFS
Selahattin E

Hi Muhammad,

Very nice shot of the luscious peaches. I like the close crop/framing. The lines from your pp work need some attention, but other than that, I like a nice simple shot like this.

Best regards,
Werner

ASAK, Tariq. Wonderful chiarascuro. Nice capture of this fresh and juicy peaches from a interesting angle with good depth of field, colors and sharpness. Cheers.
اسلام علیکم طارق. بہت عمدہ تصویر ہے . میں نے سوات کے بہت پھل کھاے ہیں. شوکت.

Dear Muhammad.
Wonderful composition. Nice colors, yellow and red always looks very good.
Best regards Siegfried

Salam Bro,
What a superb stil life shot vith good colours and lighting.TFS.
Best regards,

hAyAti

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  • ayse51 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1683 W: 124 N: 1437] (20268)
  • [2009-11-04 13:53]

Hi Muhammad,
great macro and great details.Beautiful naturel colours.TFS.Necla.

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  • AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1005 W: 81 N: 66] (12152)
  • [2009-11-04 21:07]

dear Muhammad Tariq,
so real that it looks like wonder planets in another sweet space.
a splendid macro shot with very fresh surface touch and colors,
thank you,
Akihisa

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