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• rewshearer (20821)
• [2009-11-04 11:15]

A simple and appealing portrait with great use of avaialble light - very diffuse and even.

The lens did ok but your aperture was too wide. I think you should have closed it down to maybe f/5.6 or similar - you see here that her near eye is sharp, but her further eye is slightly out of focus. That is the danger with very wide apertures!

regards
Rew

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• mamcg (4521)
• [2009-11-04 17:05]

Salaam Mushtaq,
Here again Rew won the crtique match and what he says is the lesson of a teacher to the student.
I appreciate his skill and it is also a guide like for us.
I almost forgot about this and I usually thought that we were two whom shot this but we were three, and well done as the rest is said by Rew.
Regards with TFS.

Musa.

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• KBE (2707)
• [2009-11-04 20:45]
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Hello Mushtaq
Welcome to TL and congratulations on getting 80-200 and 180 mm lenses, it feels so good to see more photographers from Quetta :)

This is a very smart lens n is mostly recommended, i myself was interested to get the 80-200 but went for Sigma's 70-200 anyway. :)

Very nice capture of the cute kid, she can be a very pretty model indeed n u've done it very nicely, though u might need to retouch this one(IMO only).

The good thing is, to take permission and then shoot the way u want, composition and pose, it also allow u to utilize the natural light according to ur choice and if u intend to use some reflectors to fill aswell :)

Hope to see much more from ur side, have a good day :)

Regards,
Jahanzeib

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• Aazragi (1522)
• [2009-11-05 6:37]

Salam,
What a cute girl, lovely shot you got here. Well done.
Latif

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• Silvio2006 (42585)
• [2009-11-05 13:38]

Ciao Mushtaq, beautiful portrait with lovely model, splendid expression, very well done, ciao Silvio

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• ayse51 (20268)
• [2009-11-24 7:57]

Hi Mustaq Hussain,
beautiful portrait,beautiful naturel colours.Well taken.TFS.Necla.