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Fragile


Fragile
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Copyright: Muhammad Fiaz Asim Zayer (elegance) (22)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-11-29
Categories: Daily Life
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-01-28 17:57
Viewed: 439
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I choose this topic because they have very similar properties thats is 'fragile'. I am learning and i cant find myself fit into you guys,as you are very much talented and experts, your kinds comments/critque will guide me..

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To kitflorendo: Thnx my friend.elegance 1 01-30 18:19
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  • mugush Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 477 W: 48 N: 164] (1728)
  • [2006-01-28 18:15]

nice title,and nice note..nice photo..
tell you dont use dark colors signature's colors.
thanks for sharing
Love
Mugush

Good collection for a still-life. Light is a little harsh on the foreground flower First, the website address - it is unnecessary? Second it is strong/large and distracts a lot. The framing is over-decorative. Frames should never compete with the image for attention and elaborate frames are not necessary . Try plain black for best effect?
Here's a suggestion. Go see my latest. Look and think about the elements that you see. What comes into your mind? Examine the content and the framing. What does it make you feel? What are your reactions? This is a learning exercise and will influence what you do next.
I compliment you on the fact that you are thinking and trying to be creative instead of just shooting a flower in the garden. A very good start!
Welcome to the Madhouse!!

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  • LuciG Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1286 W: 153 N: 729] (8681)
  • [2006-02-08 17:08]

ola Muhammad !
uma foto quase bem conseguida, nao fosse aqule garrido no primeiro plano.
continuacao de bom trabalho!
Luci.

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