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Morality Test


Morality Test
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Copyright: Muhammad Muhsin (mark25) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 295 W: 7 N: 538] (3377)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2007-05-09
Categories: Daily Life, Decisive Moment, HPP [Heavily Post-Processed]
Camera: Nikon D70, Sigma 18-200mm F3.5-6.3 DC
Exposure: f/8, 1/250 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-05-11 15:15
Viewed: 480
Favorites: 2 [view]
Points: 16
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
The test of the morality of a society is what it does for its children.
-Dietrich Bonhoeffer

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this was the last photo i took day before yesterday, the second photo i took was of a man - burried deep within himself... i'll post that one tommorow...

this is the only photo i have taken where i had less than 2 seconds to click... i was walking back to my cousin shoaib's shop when i saw this young boy walking out of the municipality office after collecting garbage from there - its the same office where the city's 'elected' administrators reside in their air conditioned offices... fighting over their share of the 'bounties'.. which they loot from the government funds... and the funny thing is, we are talking about billions here, not millions or thousands...

i dont want this note to sound political at all - i just want you to know that this kid is about 11 at most.. and instead of holding books, or remote control cars or even a portable playstation, he is holding garbage... which he will later get paid for...

now that's where the city government excels!! this is where our 'enlightened and moderate' government shines...

and this is just a glimpse of the whole mess...

i respect this boy because he is a 'workaholic' at this age, when he collects garbage, he gives it his best shot... he doesn't make a fool out of himself or his work.. he earns every penny he makes at the end of the day..

i found him so drowned in his 'work' that he never noticed a six foot tall man taking his picture from just three feet away... now that's something to learn from... how to do your job right...

it was a popular Pakistani singer, Shahzad Roy, who took the initiative and started a kind of day-school for such children, where they get 'paid' for attending classes.. now thats what you call a real hero :) a visionary :)

i never liked Shahzad's music, but i respect him for what he's done for the under-priviledged and 'totally ignored' children...

i once saw him at a restaurant in Karachi, i wanted to shake his hand and salute him, but he left the restaurant in a blink :) bad food i guess..

http://www.zindagitrust.org/p-message.asp

thanks for your time :)

this image is not intended to hurt your feelings, it just shows just how 'great' a nation we are, and how 'good' the government is doing...

muhammad muhsin

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  • Niva Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 975 W: 0 N: 592] (7037)
  • [2007-05-11 16:14]

Hello Muhammad
I feel really sorry about it...
I understand your point of view because I live in Brazil and our problems are not so different,too.
BRIC : Brazil,Russia,India,China... large and potencially economical countries,but big social problems ,too...
Kind regards and my total respect to that child.
Nivaldo

Hi Muhammed. A very touching image. Where I come from, we rarely see poverty to this degree. I empathise with you and the situation in your country and others countries. Even without your notes, this photos tells it all.

Well taken.

Regards, Kath

I agree, without your note, it tells all. Something we have to accomplish with every picture.

We live in a culture of exploitation, where the rich exploit the poor and the strong exploit the weak, the children here have the short end of the stick.

This is one of the issues that the government has to think and do something about, rather than bicker who holds power for another 4 years and how much they should be making. They are at the top of the exploitation food chain, it has to be a revolution from within or below. For the time being, no one seems to care... they complain, but do nothing about it.

The 3-4 people working for progress have a momentous task to have to accomplish, they usually get drowned out in the chaos and madness.

I have no words, You have said it all in your note. Brilliant work. I am ashamed that I have not been able to contribute to the betterment of the children back home.

Your photo's of the children (also the last one) are really 'coming in'. It's terrible that this happens! I live in Holland, and here we never see children as poor like this. I whish that every country could say that...
Your photo's help to let people see the truth, and I think it's good you notice the trust... i'll go to take a look soon!

About the photo (the technical stuff..):

I love the b&w, good sharpness and contrast. The boy might have been more on the left side of the photo (if that would be possible with the surroundings) to make it a little more exciting composition. But with 2 seconds to shoot... that's pretty difficult.... The most important thing is that you captured the boy's face and looks. Great photo's!

Hi Muhammad,

Ah... touching doesn't seems to be the appropriate word, in-fact it almost seems sarcastic. The image is real, it depticts life that isn't shown on television, or the life you meet with an open gaze, it's the life you almost try to shy away from... and in a way attempting to dissolve it from reality.

It's a shame that our world is like this.

This is excellent photography. Simply brilliant. Too bad the content is sad.

Biance.

While I wouldn't equate playing with a gameboy with proper education, I really admire the intent of the photo as well as that poignant and honest note (I am only nitpicking this because i am an assistant teacher and trust me when I say that gameboys don't work wonders for (male) children...). Anyway, I am glad that you told us about this because, even though I am conscious of the fact that there is exploitation of marginalized groups in the world (children, women, the poor, etc.) it doesn't really hit you until you see images like this. The black and white and the incredible amount of detail and tonalities really make this a "raw" and powerful shot. The boy certainly looks distracted and tired. Good heavy contrasts, be careful to not let that white fabric (?) get overexposed at the bottom right, since it distracts. Great long depth of field for the background to be in focus, thus emphasizing the context of poverty and lack of options for this child. I wish there was something that I could do much better than sitting at this stupid computer...There probably is. Thanks so much for sharing the photo and the note
-Lara

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  • ASB Silver Star Critiquer [C: 16 W: 0 N: 0] (199)
  • [2007-06-18 9:05]

+ + + + + for this work

Aleksandra

No words.
Standing ovation.
Ciao
Antonella

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