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Still-Life


Still-Life
Photo Information
Copyright: Muhammad Naseer (naseer-afg) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 105 W: 5 N: 79] (717)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-09-18
Categories: Food, Architecture
Camera: Canon 20D
Exposure: f/4, 1/25 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-09-21 3:58
Viewed: 410
Points: 24
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hello dear TL friends.

I take this Still-Life at home when i was alone and haven't any work to do
I was bored at home and make something for shooting.
Hope you like it - Welcome for crique and comments.

Have nice weekend

Naseer,

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I do like this still life Muhammad. The set-up especially the cloth as well as the slight underexposure are very appealing to me. You have a good eye for composition, nurture it. Greetings! Danilo

Hi,
I like your composition. It is like an old picture
congratulations
Ryszard

Hi Muhammad
I like much this composition and subject, great background for vegetables, well done
tfs
Magda

Beautiful still life.

Hi Naseer,
just an excellent compo of still life indeed,
wonderful colours,
superb presentation,
perfect clarity and shsrpnes here,
welldone and yfs,
regards,
Taner

une composition qui aurait pu inspirer des peintre. bien vu. les couleurs sont magnifiquement bien choisi.
Cordialement
Audrey

Hello Muhammad, this is reminiscent of an old master painting,because of the colours you have chosen.
The choice of brown silk for the bg was an excellent idea.
Your arrangement of the vegetables is very artistic.
Good sharp quality, well done.
Tfs, regards Jean.

very interesting photo. Well composed and nicely presented.
GRACE

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1349 W: 0 N: 1643] (13394)
  • [2008-09-22 10:39]

very well presented,could be a cookingbook picture Muhammad.
jan

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  • KBE Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 438 W: 103 N: 571] (2667)
  • [2008-09-22 19:16]

Asalam o Alikum Naseer
This is a very beautiful stil life composition my friend, u really manage the presention very well, Congratulations.
I like the background u managed and muilticolors. However, i think u r missing yellow here, may be u could have used LEMON for that :)
TFS
Cheers
JZM

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  • nova Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2734 W: 263 N: 864] (8649)
  • [2008-09-25 21:04]

Hello Muhammad! This still-life picture is wonderful.Looks like an acrylic.Beautiful light,colors contrast and sharp details.The frame is also very nice.Very well done! TFS
Michel

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  • hama Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 164 W: 0 N: 68] (1257)
  • [2008-09-27 8:17]

Naseer,
good job my friend, an ancient painting of the old and dry vegitables. nice arrangement all the old piec of a cloth( I think it is piece of Afghani Burqa/Hijab)the color and the low light setting is making the picture an attractive piece of work.

But next time must use some fresh fruits or the vegitables.


Sarwar

Selam Muhammad
excellent still life and composition.
beautiful colours and details.TFS
Greetings
H.Ayhan
:)

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