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Eid 1st Day


Eid 1st Day
Photo Information
Copyright: Muhammad Fiaz Asim Zayer (elegance) (22)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-12-11
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/4, 1/190 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-12-31 14:07
Viewed: 450
Points: 0
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  • Needs Improvement 
  • Tomek Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1318 W: 47 N: 2926] (16832)
  • [2008-12-31 15:00]

Hi Muhammad:)
Sorry but this image is totally tasteless!!!!!!!!!!!!
I know that there is so many traditions all over the world but I don't understand what is the point to post pictures like this one.
Now about composition.... : it is just like snap shot, reflections in car window - bad thing and it is tilt to the right.
Take care - Tom

I pretty much ditto what tomek said. If this was in b&w this could be a photojournalistic shot, but it really is kinda tasteless and a bit too graphic for this site I think.

  • Needs Improvement 
  • dnzt Silver Star Critiquer [C: 20 W: 1 N: 1] (42)
  • [2008-12-31 16:02]

oh, this is so sad scene.... poor animal :/

Muhammed Faiz
Are you satisfied with this shot? do you think that this shot must be seen by the world. you could have posted some celebration shots of Bakar-eid.

i am sorry for this kid who is standing at the car, this girl is too young to see blood! No educated society allow their kids to roam around blood.

and technicaly as everybody told you that this is not a good shot. as far as i think you have focused your aim at this hanging animal and your subject is framed centeraly against the rules.
background is not at all impressive and even the right side of the wall has no paint and colourless wall always gives a tasteless effect.
the reflection on the car window is a big distraction.

what a piece of cr*p.

what makes you think that this is suitable for tl?

be a man.
delete this and apologise.

That's one of the last things I would have posted. It tells us nothing (new), the composition is not good.

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