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For Retirement
Photo Information
Copyright: Allan Opguar (MATARAKI) Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 23 W: 2 N: 64] (720)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-02-07
Camera: Canon EOS 1000D Rebel XSi, Canon EF 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 USM
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/60 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-02-07 8:53
Viewed: 210
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
today i consider a lucky day for me, why? because i spent a day with graemann,i've learned a lot from this guy today,a total stranger who never hesitated in sharing his knowledge and expertise to me and to Jbdijamco, Eman thanks a lot for visiting us, looking forward for future shooting sessions with you.

i took this shot at clark fields pampanga with of course Graemann The Man!!


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ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To crisgotiny: Thank youMATARAKI 1 03-07 06:33
To jpdijamco: Tnx.MATARAKI 1 02-13 06:30
To ramon: Tnx.MATARAKI 3 02-12 23:01
To graemann: ThanksMATARAKI 1 02-08 07:45
To GreenBaron: Tnx.MATARAKI 1 02-08 07:41
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Hi Allan,
Interesting DOF but also a fine close up of these rusted nuts. Excellent sharp showing the large nut with all it's details.
Hans

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  • ramon Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 272 W: 20 N: 685] (3311)
  • [2009-02-07 9:39]
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Allan

Simple and unique subject...nice presentation here.
DOF, colors, sharpness is great.

Ramon

Allan:

Nice one here. Great find too. No problem bro. My pleasure to share what I know and learn.

Ok for this photograph, I would suggest try to check the OE parts. You got some. On the top of the nuts. The pattern is a good idea. The DOF excellent. The composition is also good.

Just the OE(overexposed) parts, a minor issue. Nothing a simple curves/levels wouldn't solve.


TFS.

ayus to bro...
parang nakapila mga turnilyo.
ganda ng pagkakapresent boss. :D

very good shot nicely presented, simple yet beautiful well detailed nuts

tfs
cris(",)

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