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Copyright: Allan Opguar (MATARAKI) Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 23 W: 2 N: 64] (720)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-05-30
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Canon EOS 1000D Rebel XSi, Tamron AF18-250 1:3,5-6,3 (IF) macro
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/30 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-05-31 19:15
Viewed: 161
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
To: Rew,Cunejo,Shelbeesmom

Sirs,Ma'am,

I Attended a Photography workshop last weekend actually it's just a basic coarse for me to at least empowered with techniques on how to effectively use my camera and lens ect.on Saturday our third day we were ask to submit a portrait, scenery ( best shot,also a contest) taken inside Nayon Pilipino our workshop venue, i saw this Aeta girl and ask to pose for me for my entry, the light and lines was from a staircase i put her below the stairs for me to get nice lighting since it's cloudy and about to rain,

Can i ask help if this will be good for the portrait entry? For Lighting, exposure, composition.

Thanks a lot.

Regards,
Allan

anybody is also welcome to contribute, Thanks also.
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  • Great 
  • akg Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 159 W: 0 N: 81] (958)
  • [2009-05-31 19:28]

The mood is very well captured. I like this.
regards, abhijit.

I think this will be a good submission. The lighting is good - this is a great example of how important it is to get the setting and the lighting right, before taking the shot.

The POV is good, the composition works well, and the catchlights in her eyes are very nice. I like her interactiion with you as well.

Colours and tones are very warm and pleasant.

This is a good shot!

Rew

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  • dareco Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1714 W: 16 N: 839] (15107)
  • [2009-05-31 22:46]
  • [+]

Besides the nice lighting and colors, I think you have also managed to capture the personality and sweetness of this little girl. Nice job! and good luck! TFS

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