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This is Gara,my children's nanny i requested her to pose for me last saturday trying to shot some portraits,( she is in the house looking from the window) actually i was picturing Bubbles our cat, but she's not that cooperative so i asked Gara instead. Hope you like it.
Allan |
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(2162) - [2009-06-29 7:55]
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Hi Allan,
I hope Gara isn't easily offended as she is better behaved than the cat ha ha...Great portrait shot, focus and colours superb, you have used the light well. This will look great in B&W also. TFS
Bri
I like this one Allan - and I'm glad you made a portrait of Gara and not Bubbles.
Gara is beautiful and has played her part well in this shot. Your choice of location providing a simple frame, and the use of natural light, worked well to deliver an honest and intimate shot.
My only doubt would be those fingers, I think if her hand had remained behind the screen it would be better.
But - a lovely model and a nice portrait that I would be proud of, well done.
Rew
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(15139) - [2009-06-29 20:17]
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I really like this!! Nice composition and a great pose and emotional expression. The detail, lighting and colors are great. TFS
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beau portrait Allan,
merci
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