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hey dale, i'm guessing this figurine is white and you used a yellow light. Anyways, i did some WS, hope you dont mind. tfs.
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(895) - [2007-04-30 4:43]
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Hi Dale!
for me, ok lang ang lighting. pero i would suggest that you dont put your figurine too much on the center. apply mo rule of thirds, i guess u r familiar with that. mas artistic kc dating pag di masyadong gitna. yung lang IMHO
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- pablominto
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(27446) - [2007-05-02 3:40]
Hello Dale,
Good exposure of this small sculpture, as it is difficult to avoid reflections on shiny subjects like this!
Good details and attractive framing of subject!
Greetings,
Pablo -
Dear Dale Cesar Najarro,
your study or trial is nice and interesting.
this picture is calm and excellent.
"the light and the shadow"is the big theme for me too.
I think that in your photos more darkness may be effective to express the feeling of existence.
I'll try the WS about this image.thank you.
Regards, Akihisa
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- gavindya
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(130) - [2007-05-27 10:58]
this is nice shot !
good use of lighting, and good POV.
this is have to be art photo my friend, great colours too. but maybe in the next time you can use something white in the right object like styrofoam or acrylic for bounce back the lighting, and you will get more dimention for back object :)
tfs
Haldian
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- cesara (136)
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Nicely composed still life really good lighting.
Peter
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- r021251
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(3501) - [2007-08-05 9:47]
Wow... j'ai beaucoup à apprendre, je la garde sur mon poste. Belle créativité,utilisation maximal du sujet ,le noir est découpeur sans être agressif.. Que dire des reflets juste bien adouci.. Super .. Réal.
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Well chosen image. Technicaly I like it too. The shiny spots normaly would be considered burnt spots. However, to me, it adds to the image. Since this is you third upload there seems to be true intention in improving.
Maybe try diffusing more the flashlight light when taking the shot and see if you reach an effect that satisfy you first of all. Maktub