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• ErikSven (2299)
• [2008-04-07 4:11]

Hello Cyrene,
This is a poignant daily life shot. The joy of these children is very palpable here (we can already hear the "splash!" that will follow ;o)) and the colours look nicely natural.
One small remark: horizon is not level. Your photo is tilted to the left. This can be easily corrected.
TFS & kind regards,
Erik

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• hbs (206)
• [2008-04-07 10:28]

Hi
We used to do the same in the past
a very nice idea
hbs

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• rewshearer (20984)
• [2008-04-07 12:54]

Hehe ... cute action shot. Good timing, especially with the child in blue.

Be careful about little details - like your horizon, which isn't level. A small rotation of the shot would fix that.

Also - a little more of a photographer's note would be helpful.

Rew

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• Conspicor (751)
• [2008-04-08 21:48]

G'Day,
A really nice action shot. I particularly like the way you have captured them in mid-air, or past the point of no return. The colours of the clothing add interest.

Well composed, the subject is really clear, with no distracting background (except the lack of level which is minor really I didn't notice it at first).

As Eric noted the feeling of fun is portrayed admirably.

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• Jeruel (1383)
• [2008-04-25 4:43]

Panalo to!

I wonder why only few comments you got for this picture.
For me, this is one moment frozen in time. Perfect timing!

Jeruel

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• rminkow (15521)
• [2008-05-01 7:01]

Hi Cyrene..this is a nice shot of these kids having a good time...nice details and sharpness...well composed.

Roger