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Yani


Yani
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Copyright: Cyrene Cuenco (nyennyeno8) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 26 W: 0 N: 13] (246)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2008-03-03
Categories: Daily Life, Nature, Decisive Moment, Friends/Family, Mood
Camera: Kodak EasyShare M853
Exposure: f/3.5, 1/80 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-04-09 2:44
Viewed: 366
Points: 1
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is my friend yani .. I don't know what she was thinking about that time. It was like she was concentrating or something.. Luckily, I had my camera with me.. So I took a couple of 'stolen' shots..and this was the best shot I got ..

Enjoy!
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OK, Cyrene, I read this is a stolen shot, which makes it not easy to take it.
The high contrast, the pose of your model and the way the shadow falls on her, are interesting, but I feel she needs more space within your tight framing. She needs to "breath" a little. I also would have preferred a lower point of view (POV): now, there is some distance between the viewer and your model, as if we were looking down on her.
At last, but that's a detail, I think you did a too quick crop on the foreground: there is a strange and slightly detracting strip visible just above the bottom border of your photo.
Just my personal opinion, of course. Feel free to (dis)agree ;o).
TFS & kind regards,
Erik

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