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The Past and the Future...


The Past and the Future...
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Copyright: MAYLO MENDOZA (MYLZ) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 78 W: 7 N: 43] (622)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 1980-01-01
Categories: Friends/Family
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/20 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-05-27 3:25
Viewed: 582
Points: 5
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This photo taken in my girlfriend house when we on vacation..a point of view this photo is the angle of there eyes....
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To ErikSven: Agree...MYLZ 1 06-01 03:39
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Hello Maylo,
I do like the expression on their faces and the idea of putting the two generations together in one photo.
However, it's a pity that the focus only seems to be on the elderly lady and not on the baby as well, who looks unsharp. I'm not convinced about the frame neither and also think cropping the empty space at the left side would have made your composition stronger. Finally, it seems to me a square format would be appropriate here.
Just my personal opinion, of course. Feel free to (dis)agree ;o).
TFS & kind regards,
Erik

Dear Maylo Mendoza!
Amaizing scene.
Good point of view.
Wonderful composition.
Good idea, very good take.
TFS!

I really like these kinds of shots--the meditative grandmother and the much more active grandchild. Well done.

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